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Treatment in Patients with Psoriatic Disease and Rheumatoid Arthritis: Seven Case Reports

Clin. Pract. 2023, 13(1), 177-189; https://doi.org/10.3390/clinpract13010016
by Tomoko Akeda and Keiichi Yamanaka *
Reviewer 2:
Clin. Pract. 2023, 13(1), 177-189; https://doi.org/10.3390/clinpract13010016
Submission received: 24 December 2022 / Revised: 24 January 2023 / Accepted: 26 January 2023 / Published: 28 January 2023

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments to the Authors of Manuscript Number clinpract-2150707

with full title

Treatment strategy in patients with psoriatic disease and rheumatoid arthritis

 

 

11. In the abstract (line 7) and in line 244: I suggest changing the word “dermatitis” with: inflammatory skin disease.

  2. It is necessary to describe the psoriatic rash in each case, it is not ok to generalize the lesions as psoriatic rash. Also, describe the nail psoriasis lesions for each patient that has nail lesions.

  3. Detail the dose and periods of time of MTX, Prednisolone, Cyclosporine and other treatments used in all the cases. Please include the histopathological exam from the skin that confirms the psoriasis diagnosis and PASI before the administration of biological agent.

Author Response

Responses to the comments of Reviewer #1

 

Comments to the Author:

 

  1. In the abstract (line 7) and in line 244: I suggest changing the word “dermatitis” with: inflammatory skin disease.

Response: Thank you for your suggestions. We have changed the text as the reviewer pointed out for line 7. As for line 244, we have revised the text since these clear data are proven events at the experimental level in mice.

 

  1. It is necessary to describe the psoriatic rash in each case, it is not ok to generalize the lesions as psoriatic rash. Also, describe the nail psoriasis lesions for each patient that has nail lesions.

Response: Thank you for your pointing this out. We have added descriptions of skin and nail lesions in each case.

 

  1. Detail the dose and periods of time of MTX, Prednisolone, Cyclosporine and other treatments used in all the cases. Please include the histopathological exam from the skin that confirms the psoriasis diagnosis and PASI before the administration of biological agent.

Response: Thank you for your valuable input. We have added the dosage and duration of each drug as far as we can check. We have also added PASI score. Pathological tests have not been performed or performed by a previous physician, and no documents are available.

Reviewer 2 Report

 

Reviewer comments

Journal clinics and practice

Title Treatment strategy in patients with psoriatic disease and rheumatoid arthritis

This manuscript covers an important topic which is the overlap between RA and PsA. Indeed, this is an interesting topic .Some points need to be addressed  

The title gives an impression of a review article. However, the research style is case report .So ,the authors should refer to the study design in the title

24.. Because it is not a rare disease, we encounter both PsA and 24 RA cases.

This sentence is difficult to be understood

Introduction ...There are many sentences in the introduction that have no refences

238.. RA is seropositive, and the underlying pathology is arthropathy... a difficult sentence to be understood

242.. expectancy…

A reference is needed here

244.. dermatitis

Psoriasis instead of dermatitis

244.. The diagnosis and treatment of comorbidity has been recently discussed

What is meant by the word “comorbidity”

245… One such complication is enthesitis.

246.. leading to 246 synovitis secondary

English editing and grammar revision are mandatory

250.. RA,

The author started with RA first then PsA, then again RA …

The writing manner should be more concise and scientific

255.. Neither PsA nor

The author started by treatment then clinical manifestations. The writing of discussion should be rearranged again

The strength, limitations and recommendations of the study should be added at the end of the discussion section

 

 

Author Response

Responses to the comments of Reviewer #1

 

Comments to the Author:

This manuscript covers an important topic which is the overlap between RA and PsA. Indeed, this is an interesting topic. Some points need to be addressed  

The title gives an impression of a review article. However, the research style is case report .So ,the authors should refer to the study design in the title 

Response: Thank you for your suggestions. We have changed the title.

 

24.. Because it is not a rare disease, we encounter both PsA and 24 RA cases.

This sentence is difficult to be understood 

Response: Thank you for pointing it out. We have changed the sentence.

 

Introduction ...There are many sentences in the introduction that have no refences 

Response: Thank you for pointing it out. We have added the references.

 

238.. RA is seropositive, and the underlying pathology is arthropathy... a difficult sentence to be understood 

Response: Thank you for your suggestion. We have changed the sentence.

 

242.. expectancy…

A reference is needed here 

Response: Thank you for pointing it out. We have added the references.

 

244.. dermatitis

Psoriasis instead of dermatitis 

Response: Since these clear data are proven events at the experimental level in mice, we have revised the text.

244.. The diagnosis and treatment of comorbidity has been recently discussed

What is meant by the word “comorbidity”

Response: Thank you for pointing it out. We have added more details about comorbidity.

 

245… One such complication is enthesitis.

246.. leading to 246 synovitis secondary

English editing and grammar revision are mandatory 

Response: Thank you for your suggestions. A native English-speaking scientist proofread it. A certificate is also attached.

 

250.. RA,

The author started with RA first then PsA, then again RA …

The writing manner should be more concise and scientific 

Response: Thank you for pointing it out. We have corrected the text according to your point.

 

255.. Neither PsA nor

The author started by treatment then clinical manifestations. The writing of discussion should be rearranged again 

The strength, limitations and recommendations of the study should be added at the end of the discussion section 

Response: Thank you for pointing it out. We have totally arranged the discussion section.

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

Please verify the bibliography.

In the last manuscript appear 2 different bibliography. Please correct this aspect. 

Author Response

Responses to the comments of Reviewer #1

 

Comments to the Author:

 

  1. Please verify the bibliography.

In the last manuscript appear 2 different bibliography. Please correct this aspect. 

 

Response: Apologies for the careless mistake. The duplicate reference has been removed.

Reviewer 2 Report

The manuscript has improved to a great extent 

Author Response

Thank you for taking care of our manuscript.

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