Soil–Structure Interaction Assessment of the 23 November 1980 Irpinia-Basilicata Earthquake
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
This manuscript aims presenting a numerical study on the soil-structure interaction based on the Irpinia-Basilicata earthquake in Italy. A numerical work was developed to assess the soil-structure interaction in the structures response. The study is important and addresses an important issue regarding the seismic behaviour of structures. However further explanations are needed. Also, the reviewer found that some English grammar errors. The authors are advised to check the manuscript again carefully in order to avoid English grammar errors.
My assessment is that this work are interesting. However, some revisions and clarifications are required before the manuscript is suitable for publication, as outlined in the following points.
Abstract:
- Please include major findings.
Background
- Which type of structures were more affected?
- Please provide examples of the importance of the soil acceleration amplification in recent earthquakes such as Nepal. Please consider the following references:
- Varum, A. Furtado, H. Rodrigues, J. Dias-Oliveira, N. Vila-Pouca, and A. Arêde, "Seismic performance of the infill masonry walls and ambient vibration tests after the Ghorka 2015, Nepal earthquake," Bulletin of Earthquake Engineering, vol. 15, no. 3, pp. 1185-1212, 2017/03/01 2017.
- Gautam, H. Rodrigues, K. K. Bhetwal, P. Neupane, and Y. Sanada, "Common structural and construction deficiencies of Nepalese buildings," Innovative Infrastructure Solutions, journal article vol. 1, no. 1, p. 1, March 29 2016.
- Varum, R. Dumaru, A. Furtado, A. R. Barbosa, D. Gautam, and H. Rodrigues, "Chapter 3 - Seismic Performance of Buildings in Nepal After the Gorkha Earthquake," in Impacts and Insights of the Gorkha Earthquake, D. Gautam and H. Rodrigues, Eds.: Elsevier, 2018, pp. 47-63.
- The state-of-art review of numerical methodologies used to assess the role of the soil amplification is poor. Please improve
Case Study
- The authors must justify the reason behind the type of structure selected. It is well known that the structure response depends highly of their own natural frequency. The reader needs to understand the type of structure selected and the relationship with those existing that were effected by the earthquake.
- Was it selected the accelerogram of the three directions? Please provide information regarding that. The authors should provide the natural frequencies of the building structure with and without the masonry walls;
- Please highlight the effect of including the masonry walls in the building natural frequencies. Please consider the following reference to justify:
- Furtado, H. Rodrigues, A. Arêde, H. Varum, M. Grubišić, and T. K. Šipoš, "Prediction of the earthquake response of a three-storey infilled RC structure," Engineering Structures, vol. 171, pp. 214-235, 2018/09/15/ 2018.
Case Study
- What is the consequence of varying the position of the water?
- It would be interesting, since the authors considered only one accelerogram, to perform the analysis considering the three types of soils (dry and water)
Discussion
- Please merge this section with the section “results”.
Conclusions
- Please improve the conclusions by including the numbers of the soil amplification result
Author Response
Please see the attached file
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Reviewer 2 Report
Typo corrections. Replace bold text with text in italics, or as specified.
25 Calitri, San Giorgio La Molara, and Grassano) [1-4]. It consisted of several rupture episodes occurred
Episodes which occurred
27 A wide area (about 3500 km2) recorded serious damages, many casualities and fifteen localities were
damage
29 Pescopagano, and Balvano. It is estimated that on a total of approximately 1.85 milion buildings
of
34 on the buildings. Eight damage levels were defined by considering the action to be undertaken, such
to
37 the earthquake at urban scale. An important study regarding the effects of spectral accelerations was
at the urban
39 particular attention to Naples area. In addition, [8] simulated the recorded strong-motion data by
To the Naples
50 [9-11]. In this regard, when superficial deposit lies over the bedrock, amplifications of surface seismic
deposits overlie
55 response of the superficial layers is strongly influenced by the uncertainty associated to the definition
56 of soil properties and model parameters that are fundamental to assess well known mechanism of
Assess the well
62 a first step where free-field (FF) analyses are computed on several layers of soil and performing a SSI
and secondly, performing
69 on Irpinia earthquake, strength parameters for superficial layers were not available. Therefore, it was
on the Irpinia
70 necessary a preliminary study aimed to select representative values based on available information,
necessary for a
delete “aimed”
74 that the ground motion amplitude decreases at the foundation level with respect to the free-field may
which decreases….
79 were found in literature. Then a complete 3D numerical model with the system (soil + foundation +
in the literature
replace Then with Secondly
81 material with a 3D mesh (Figure 1). Penalty method is adopted for the boundary conditions (tolerance
The penalty
85 (described by the 3rd DOF) is constrained in correspondence with all the boundaries (at the base and
according to
89 verify proper simulation of FF conditions in correspondence with lateral boundaries, accelerations at
that conform
215 the range of periods between 0 to 1 s. It is worth to consider the role of soil deformability in the
considering
218 structure can be founded (maximum amplification: 1.66) since the TF peak occurs in correspondence
conjunction
220 section 3.2). It is worth to note that amplifications were less significant in correspondence with the
221 other soil models. Dry conditions were shown to be noticeable for those periods that are far from the
This sentence is not clear in meaning. Do you mean that the amplifications were less significant compared to the other soil models, or in relation to the other soil models...
223 those in correspondence of saturated conditions. S1 seems to behave different from the other cases,
that relate to
228 [39, 40 and 41], there has been an increasing attention to new engineering demand parameter (EDP)
in the
236 at the base of the structure. It is possible to see that the diagram presents the typical hysterical
hysteresis
238 that the rocking component of the foundation did not affect relevantly the performance of the
relevantly affect
244 of the longitudinal accelerations and thus the seismic performance of the structure. It is worth to see
250 addition, it is worth to notice the significant peak in correspondence with 0.6 s, where all the
noting
256 cm, meaning that a consistent translation occurred in correspondence with the foundation level. In
accordance
258 displacements along the height of the buildings and in correspondence of the various floors. The
relation to
259 maximum top displacement in correspondence with the top of the structure was 1.885 cm, that can
relation to
261 Figure 15 represents shear forces versus longitudinal displacements in correspondence with the
accordance
263 and to determinate the potential mechanism of collapse. It is worth to notice that the values were
noting
280 The results demonstrated firstly that the numerical model performed the system (ground281
Delete firstly.
Replace performed with simulated
281 foundation-structure) properly, allowing to assess the importance of the soil deformability in the
allowing us to
285 In this regard, the values of the shear forces in correspondence with the masonry elements showed
relation to
286 that the potential damage can be the shear failure, as expected and as demonstrated in the typical
Delete “the”
289 The paper investigates the effects of soil deformability on a typical structural configuration by
investigated
290 analysing a 3D soil-structure model built up with OpenSeesPL and the results are the consequences
OpenSeesPL; the
292 proposing a model that performs detailed 3D models of both the soil and the structure and assessing
Replace models with “simulations”
structure; allowing an assessment of
294 Overall, the paper demonstrates that a rigid, low-rise building may experience big amplifications
configuration
295 effects due to soil deformability that needs to be accounted for this kind of structural configurations.
for in this….configuration
296 Even if the findings are limited to the considered conditions, they may potentially be useful to
specified conditions presented here,
297 propose formulations that include SSI effects inside code provisions. In this regard, future parametric
within
298 numerical simulations of the response of other structural typologies will be performed.
are recommended.
326 Earthquake in the Eastern Area of Naples Earthquake Spectra (16)n.3, 2000
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334 assessment of RC buildings. Bull Earthq Eng 2014;12(4): 1755 – 76.
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357 20. Amorosi, A., Castellaro, S., Mulargia, F. (2008), “Single-Station Passive Seismic Stratigraphy : an
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365 vol. Insights and Innovations in Structural Engineering, Mechanics and Computation, pp. 364-369, ISBN:978-1-
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369 25. Rodriguez-Marek A, Kruiver PP, Meijers P, Bommer JJ, Dost B, van Elk J, Doornhof D. A regional site370
response model for the Groningen gas field. Bull Seismol Soc Am 2017;107(5):2067–77.
response
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383 32. Zienkiewicz, O. C., Chan, A. H. C., Pastor, M., Paul, D. K., and Shiomi, T.(1990). “Static and dynamic
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399 38. CIRCOLARE 2 febbraio 2009 , n. 617 Istruzioni per l'applicazione delle «Nuove norme tecniche per le
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421 Innovations in Structural Engineering, Mechanics and Computation, pp. 364-369, ISBN:978-1-138-02927-9.
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Abstract: add in a sentence briefly summarising the results. Currently you state what will be discussed and how the study can be applied and the numerical solutions that are performed. Say what the results of the numerical simulations were? (ie that it modelled the ground-foundation-structure correctly)
Author Response
Please consider the developed version of the manuscript, uploaded here
Many thanks
Regards
Typo corrections. Replace bold text with text in italics, or as specified.
Many thanks, please see the modifications in the developed version.
25 Calitri, San Giorgio La Molara, and Grassano) [1-4]. It consisted of several rupture episodes occurred
Episodes which occurred
27 A wide area (about 3500 km2) recorded serious damages, many casualities and fifteen localities were
damage
29 Pescopagano, and Balvano. It is estimated that on a total of approximately 1.85 milion buildings
of
34 on the buildings. Eight damage levels were defined by considering the action to be undertaken, such
to
37 the earthquake at urban scale. An important study regarding the effects of spectral accelerations was
at the urban
39 particular attention to Naples area. In addition, [8] simulated the recorded strong-motion data by
To the Naples
50 [9-11]. In this regard, when superficial deposit lies over the bedrock, amplifications of surface seismic
deposits overlie
55 response of the superficial layers is strongly influenced by the uncertainty associated to the definition
56 of soil properties and model parameters that are fundamental to assess well known mechanism of
Assess the well
62 a first step where free-field (FF) analyses are computed on several layers of soil and performing a SSI
and secondly, performing
69 on Irpinia earthquake, strength parameters for superficial layers were not available. Therefore, it was
on the Irpinia
70 necessary a preliminary study aimed to select representative values based on available information,
necessary for a
delete “aimed”
74 that the ground motion amplitude decreases at the foundation level with respect to the free-field may
which decreases….
79 were found in literature. Then a complete 3D numerical model with the system (soil + foundation +
in the literature
replace Then with Secondly
81 material with a 3D mesh (Figure 1). Penalty method is adopted for the boundary conditions (tolerance
The penalty
85 (described by the 3rd DOF) is constrained in correspondence with all the boundaries (at the base and
according to
89 verify proper simulation of FF conditions in correspondence with lateral boundaries, accelerations at
that conform
215 the range of periods between 0 to 1 s. It is worth to consider the role of soil deformability in the
considering
218 structure can be founded (maximum amplification: 1.66) since the TF peak occurs in correspondence
conjunction
220 section 3.2). It is worth to note that amplifications were less significant in correspondence with the
221 other soil models. Dry conditions were shown to be noticeable for those periods that are far from the
This sentence is not clear in meaning. Do you mean that the amplifications were less significant compared to the other soil models, or in relation to the other soil models...
This sentence has been completely canceled because not necessary
223 those in correspondence of saturated conditions. S1 seems to behave different from the other cases,
that relate to
228 [39, 40 and 41], there has been an increasing attention to new engineering demand parameter (EDP)
in the
236 at the base of the structure. It is possible to see that the diagram presents the typical hysterical
hysteresis
238 that the rocking component of the foundation did not affect relevantly the performance of the
relevantly affect
244 of the longitudinal accelerations and thus the seismic performance of the structure. It is worth to see
250 addition, it is worth to notice the significant peak in correspondence with 0.6 s, where all the
noting
256 cm, meaning that a consistent translation occurred in correspondence with the foundation level. In
accordance
258 displacements along the height of the buildings and in correspondence of the various floors. The
relation to
259 maximum top displacement in correspondence with the top of the structure was 1.885 cm, that can
relation to
261 Figure 15 represents shear forces versus longitudinal displacements in correspondencewith the
accordance
263 and to determinate the potential mechanism of collapse. It is worth to notice that the values were
noting
280 The results demonstrated firstly that the numerical model performed the system (ground281
Delete firstly.
Replace performed with simulated
281 foundation-structure) properly, allowing to assess the importance of the soil deformability in the
allowing us to
285 In this regard, the values of the shear forces in correspondence with the masonry elements showed
relation to
286 that the potential damage can be the shear failure, as expected and as demonstrated in the typical
Delete “the”
289 The paper investigates the effects of soil deformability on a typical structural configuration by
investigated
290 analysing a 3D soil-structure model built up with OpenSeesPL and the results are the consequences
OpenSeesPL; the
292 proposing a model that performs detailed 3D models of both the soil and the structure and assessing
Replace models with “simulations”
structure; allowing an assessment of
294 Overall, the paper demonstrates that a rigid, low-rise building may experience big amplifications
configuration
295 effects due to soil deformability that needs to be accounted for this kind of structural configurations.
for in this….configuration
296 Even if the findings are limited to the considered conditions, they may potentially be useful to
specified conditions presented here,
297 propose formulations that include SSI effects inside code provisions. In this regard, future parametric
within
298 numerical simulations of the response of other structural typologies will be performed.
are recommended.
326 Earthquake in the Eastern Area of Naples Earthquake Spectra (16)n.3, 2000
Insert space
334 assessment of RC buildings. Bull Earthq Eng 2014;12(4): 1755 – 76.
Insert space
357 20. Amorosi, A., Castellaro, S., Mulargia, F. (2008), “Single-Station Passive Seismic Stratigraphy : an
Remove space
365 vol. Insights and Innovations in Structural Engineering, Mechanics and Computation, pp. 364-369, ISBN:978-1-
Insert space
369 25. Rodriguez-Marek A, Kruiver PP, Meijers P, Bommer JJ, Dost B, van Elk J, Doornhof D. A regional site370
response model for the Groningen gas field. Bull Seismol Soc Am 2017;107(5):2067–77.
response
Insert space
383 32. Zienkiewicz, O. C., Chan, A. H. C., Pastor, M., Paul, D. K., and Shiomi, T.(1990). “Static and dynamic
Insert space
399 38. CIRCOLARE 2 febbraio 2009 , n. 617 Istruzioni per l'applicazione delle «Nuove norme tecniche per le
Remove space
421 Innovations in Structural Engineering, Mechanics and Computation, pp. 364-369, ISBN:978-1-138-02927-9.
Insert space
Abstract: add in a sentence briefly summarising the results. Currently you state what will be discussed and how the study can be applied and the numerical solutions that are performed. Say what the results of the numerical simulations were? (ie that it modelled the ground-foundation-structure correctly)
Many thanks for your observation, please see the developed abstract.
Author Response File: Author Response.docx