The Effectiveness of Computer Aided Video Modeling in Teaching Basic Basketball Movements to Individuals with Down Syndrome
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Extensive editing of English language and style required.
It is hard to follow as it is now.
Many sentences are incomprehensible due to language errors or incorrect wording. I am under the impression that the research itself is sound. But extensive editing of language is required. For instance:
L26 “caused by the twenty-first (21) chromosome containing an extra chromosome” A chromosome does not contain a chromosome. BETTER: “caused by an extra copy of the twenty-first chromosome.”
L28 “Down syndrome is a surplus of a plus chromosome, seen mostly along with mental incompetence.” What is a surplus of a plus chromosome? And in English the term "mental incompetence" is not used in articles about people with intellectual disabilities. BETTER: “People with Down syndrome have some degree of intellectual disability ⎯ usually in the mild to moderate range.”
L30
“Special-needs individuals also require a variety of skills required by societal life, such as normal-development individuals.”
BETTER: “Just like individuals with a typical development, special-needs individuals need to learn a variety of skills required by societal life.”
In addition, the introduction should be further divided into paragraphs. Now, new topics are introduced but the paragraph continues without a break.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer,
First of all, thank you for your comments.
Necessary explanations have been made for your comments.
Details are in the attached file.
Best Regards,
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Reviewer 2 Report
I advise the authors to remove point 2.2 (Practitioner);
its seems that The Effectiveness of Computer Aided Video Modelling is very usefull but the study is fragil because they are only 4 participants and its difficult to explore these results.
i suggese that the authors enlarge the sample and verify if the results trend is the same.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer,
First of all, thank you for your comments.
Necessary explanations have been made for your comments.
Details are in the attached file.
Best Regards,
Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Round 2
Reviewer 2 Report
i accept the authors corrections.
