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Exploring the Quality of Life of People with Incomplete Spinal Cord Injury Who Can Ambulate

Disabilities 2023, 3(4), 455-476; https://doi.org/10.3390/disabilities3040029
by Murveena Jeawon 1,2,3, Bethany Hase 1, Susanna Miller 1, Janice Eng 2,3,4,5, Andrea Bundon 3,6, Habib Chaudhury 7, Jocelyn Maffin 8, Ryan Clarkson 8, Jenna Wright 8 and W. Ben Mortenson 1,2,3,5,*
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Disabilities 2023, 3(4), 455-476; https://doi.org/10.3390/disabilities3040029
Submission received: 21 August 2023 / Revised: 22 September 2023 / Accepted: 27 September 2023 / Published: 6 October 2023
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Mobility, Access, and Participation for Disabled People)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The authors should discuss how the general population can be taught to accept, include, and facilitate people with disability to participate in main stream. Examples:

1. Education in schools and colleges to accept and respect persons with disability instead of looking down upon them.

2. Education of public via television programmes to understand the feelings of people with disability

3. Legislation to enforce employers both in private and public sector to provide opportunities for disabled persons to gain training and take up jobs. To compel employers via legislation to provide additional facilities for disabled persons to work e.g. providing suitable toilet facility, access, remote working, etc. 

4. To compel all businesses to provide access to persons with disability.

 

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Reviewer 2 Report

 

In this manuscript, the authors focus on a survey of quality of life of incomplete spinal cord injuries with ambulation and their potential associated factors. They did quantitative and qualitative analysis and identified both negative barriers and facilitators. Finally, they propose how to improve quality of life.

 

It is a comprehensive study and the data can be used by medical staff, communities, people surrounding to disabled people and disabled people themselves. 

 

There are a few points below can be considerate to improve  quality of this study

 

Method:

 

136: ambulatory dependent on physical assistance (level 1), ambulator dependent on physical assistance (level 2),

What is difference between Level 1 and 2?

 

Results: The low employment (16.7%) is a big concern, which is closely related to QOL

 

Need to find the potential reasons why the majority of participants in the low quality of life group are female? Does it relate to neurogenic bladder and bowel that need additional attention comparing to male.

 

Discussion

 

457, “more than half of the participants were unemployed” The table 1 show 83% un-employed, and this fact should be emphasized as “the majority (83.3%) of the participants were unemployed.”

 

469, secondary complications should include neurogenic bladder and bowel, as well as loss of sexual function, which are very serious of complications. The participates may not disclose these complications due to sensitivity of these topics.

 

 508, mobility deterioration might relate to aging. 

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