Concurrent Hookah (Waterpipe) and Substance Use among Sexual Minority Adults in the United States: Findings from the Population Assessment of Tobacco and Health Study
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
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Reviewer 2 Report
It's well organized study. This manuscript advance the existing paucity of knowledge regarding the co-occurrence of substance use among adult SM hookah smokers, relative to heterosexuals.
I have very few comments - rather technical:
Comment 1
Is there any results that can be shown in a figure? Figures are much easier to understand.
Comment 2
No date of approval of the bioethical commission
Comment 3
There are no inclusion and exclusion criteria for the cohort
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Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
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