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The ARTEMIS Center: An Environmental Health Prevention Platform Dedicated to Reproduction

Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2020, 17(3), 694; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph17030694
by Fleur Delva 1,2,*, Guyguy Manangama 1,2, Patrick Brochard 1,2, Raphaëlle Teysseire 1,2 and Loïc Sentilhes 2,3
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2020, 17(3), 694; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph17030694
Submission received: 17 December 2019 / Revised: 15 January 2020 / Accepted: 18 January 2020 / Published: 21 January 2020
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Health Impact Assessment)

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Reviewer 2 Report

This is a very nice description of the investigations in clinical practices. It was very interesting to me how this study is performing in ARTEMIS center. The manuscript is very well written and could be interesting for scientists working in the field of public health. I definitely recommend publishing this paper. However, I would like to present some additional information.
Page 7. -Which pesticides ( or at least, split between insecticides, herbicides, etc.)
-Which solvents?-Which metals?-Which PAH?Describe agricultural areas and domestic pesticide usage
Table 4.- Agricultural, forestry, and fisheries professions are very different, they must be split.-Scientific professionals - authors must clarify if they are working in the labs-Military professions - are they working with chemicals?
Table 5. - How old are houses, What is a history of the usage of flame retardants?
General comment. Why authors did not include in the list of chemical emerging global contaminants, at least, brominated flame retardants?
Again, these suggestions are minor and this manuscript could be recommended for publication.

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