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Mothering a Child with ADHD in the Ultra-Orthodox Community

Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19(21), 14483; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph192114483
by Jennifer Budman * and Adina Maeir
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19(21), 14483; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph192114483
Submission received: 21 September 2022 / Revised: 25 October 2022 / Accepted: 2 November 2022 / Published: 4 November 2022
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Addressing the Health Needs of Vulnerable Populations)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The article is interesting. A few suggestions for the text come to mind:

 1.I would dispense with the quotation in the title, after all we are dealing with a scientific article. 

2.Why are words like 'Maternal roles' capitalized in the abstract.

3.In the keywords, I think ADHD should also be included.  

4.The author writes in line 57 "UO Jews". Should this fact not be included in the abstract.

5.It is difficult to find in the text exactly when the research was carried out.

6.In line 353 the author briefly explains the role of women as "the main breadwinner". Shouldn't there be at least a little more in line 552. 

7.In the limitations, it would be worth noting that the results are not representative due to the number of people surveyed.

8. When indicating further research, it would be worth pointing out that it should also include orthodox representatives of other religions.

9. There is a suggestion to state, very generally, where the research was conducted. I think this too is a limitation.

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Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Changes have amended the problems previously detected 

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