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Use of Analytic Hierarchy Process for Wind Farm Installation Region Prioritization–Case Study

Energies 2020, 13(9), 2284; https://doi.org/10.3390/en13092284
by Rômulo Lemos Bulhões 1, Eudemário Souza de Santana 2 and Alex Álisson Bandeira Santos 1,*
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3:
Reviewer 4: Anonymous
Energies 2020, 13(9), 2284; https://doi.org/10.3390/en13092284
Submission received: 6 March 2020 / Revised: 15 April 2020 / Accepted: 16 April 2020 / Published: 5 May 2020
(This article belongs to the Section A3: Wind, Wave and Tidal Energy)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Use of the Analytic Hierarchy Process for Region Prioritization for Wind Farm Installation – Case Study

This paper proposes the AHP method to survey the priority regions for the installation of wind farms.  Even though it is an interesting and researchable topic, the paper is not publishable currently.  My recommendation is that the author makes a major effort to improve the paper.

The following are issues, problems, questions, and suggestions that may help the author to improve the paper.

1.Literature on multiple-criteria decision-making (MCDM) models has been increasing from past many years. The paper needs to clarify its contribution and significance on academic and practical front.

 
2.How is the proposed model more outstanding compared to other existing approaches?  Since a lot of works have been done using some kind of multiple-criteria decision-making (MCDM) models to solve similar problems, how did the authors know this is a good approach, but not other existing ones?

3.What is the general methodology or technology to address the regions of wind farms selection problem?
 

The authors should review papers with similar topics and explain the similarities and differences of this paper with others.  In addition, how and why is the proposed method more outstanding than others’ works, especially the works by Otay and Jaller (2020)?  More works by other scholars should be added.  A comparison of these works is suggested.


Otay, I., Jaller, M., 2020. “Multi-criteria and multi-expert wind power farm location selection using a pythagorean fuzzy analytic hierarchy process,” Advances in Intelligent Systems and Computing,  1029, pp. 905-914.


Emeksiz, C., Demirci, B., 2019. “The determination of offshore wind energy potential of Turkey by using novelty hybrid site selection method,” Sustainable Energy Technologies and Assessments, 36,100562.


Ayodele, T.R., Ogunjuyigbe, A.S.O., Odigie, O., Munda, J.L., 2018. “A multi-criteria GIS based model for wind farm site selection using interval type-2 fuzzy analytic hierarchy process: The case study of Nigeria,” Applied Energy, 228, pp.1853-1869.

4.The authors need to differentiate the newly proposed parts and the parts that were from others’ works. 
 

5.The manuscript is like an extended case study.  Is it applicable in the regions of wind farms selection problem ?

 
6.Follow the journal requirement to revise the format of the references.

 

Author Response

Thanks for the referee comments. Below comments and responses.

1. Literature on multiple-criteria decision-making (MCDM) models has been increasing from past many years. The paper needs to clarify its contribution and significance on academic and practical front. DONE

 
2.How is the proposed model more outstanding compared to other existing approaches?  Basically bringing other criteria for decision making, based on identifiable data, for an adequate assessment and implementation of public and private policies for regional development and investment with wind energy.

Since a lot of works have been done using some kind of multiple-criteria decision-making (MCDM) models to solve similar problems, how did the authors know this is a good approach, but not other existing ones? The authors evaluated that the selection methods based only on technical criteria is very restricted for the development of regions, requiring other factors for the analysis, as indicated in the article. The sum of these factors and their ranking with the AHP can thus support the implementation of policies to support the deployment of wind energy in states and countries. This was the approach and main aspect that the article intended to bring.

3.What is the general methodology or technology to address the regions of wind farms selection problem? Basically the methodology used is the technical potential; checking the wind speed profile in the region to be installed the wind farm. In addition, the statistical variability of its constancy, verifying the energy density achieved.
 

The authors should review papers with similar topics and explain the similarities and differences of this paper with others.  In addition, how and why is the proposed method more outstanding than others’ works, especially the works by Otay and Jaller (2020)?  More works by other scholars should be added.  A comparison of these works is suggested. DONE


Otay, I., Jaller, M., 2020. “Multi-criteria and multi-expert wind power farm location selection using a pythagorean fuzzy analytic hierarchy process,” Advances in Intelligent Systems and Computing,  1029, pp. 905-914. Ok


Emeksiz, C., Demirci, B., 2019. “The determination of offshore wind energy potential of Turkey by using novelty hybrid site selection method,” Sustainable Energy Technologies and Assessments, 36,100562. Ok


Ayodele, T.R., Ogunjuyigbe, A.S.O., Odigie, O., Munda, J.L., 2018. “A multi-criteria GIS based model for wind farm site selection using interval type-2 fuzzy analytic hierarchy process: The case study of Nigeria,” Applied Energy, 228, pp.1853-1869. Ok

4.The authors need to differentiate the newly proposed parts and the parts that were from others’ works.  DONE
 

5.The manuscript is like an extended case study.  Is it applicable in the regions of wind farms selection problem? It is possible, considering the local characteristics.

 
6.Follow the journal requirement to revise the format of the references. DONE

Reviewer 2 Report

Dear authors

 

Please see attached file

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

Thanks for the referee comments. Below comments and responses.

 

General comments

 The authors need to expand on the approach they used to elicit the expert information, e.g. profiling of experts, way of selection, and method of opinion extraction.  In line 247 the authors mention for first time a questionnaire that was used in their research, but not enough details are provided.  A more detailed analysis should be included in the methodology section.  DONE, section 2.2 included.

 

 There are some structural problems in the article.  Sections 4.1, 4.2, 4.3 and 4.4 present results and therefore should be included in the Results section.  Section 4 (Discussion) should therefore be written, because it is actually missing.

DONE; the sections were restructured to give the understanding that the discussions were made throughout the presentation of the results.

 It would be good the authors to include a reliability statistical measure for the weight values presented in Tables 2 and 3 (e.g. the Cronbach’s alpha value).  In the same tables they should provide an explanation why the geometric mean was used and not the median value. DONE

As Saaty (2008) described, the geometric mean is the only one that works in AHP to better represent the results of judgments; because of this, geometric mean was used at work.

It is also important to note that the AHP method has its sensitivity criteria for its statistical confidence, and does not require other tools for this (so tools like Cronbach’s alpha value have not been implemented).

 

  A more thorough literature review of AHP applications with emphasis on the energy field should be included, as well as other approaches related to area ranking for wind farm investments. DONE in the introduction; add refer. [19-23].

 English language needs attention. DONE

 

Specific comments

  1. 85-87 and 89-91. Please correct the English language. DONE
  2. 293. ‘selected’ instead of ‘elected’? DONE
  3. 267-272. It does not make sense. There are no sections 4.1, 4.2 etc. in section 3. DONE
  4. 372-374. There is no section 5.1 DONE
  5. 415 “… and 0” What does it mean? DONE

Reviewer 3 Report

 

Row/s

Comment

General comments

  • although the theoretical background is presented in the introduction, no concrete methodology is developed in the following section
  • several omissions or mistakes regarding the numbering of the sections and tables pointed at
  • omission to explain some terms of the equations
  • the study has a seed of innovation but the methodology must be better developed and presented

67-69

  • check the phrase continuity before and after brackets

89

  • use the present tense and avoid imperfect

108-110

  • mixing absolute and relative regarding comparison

140

  • what are CI and RCI in flowchart 2?

170-171

  • why wind speed values between 6.5 and 7 m/s are not taken into account?

174

  • Vi is not explained

176

  • VTn is not present in the formula

178

  • ambiguous notation for solar incidence (V) which can be confounded with wind speed
  • explain the need for solar incidence in the index

179

  • ATn is not present in the formula

185 (fig. 4)

  • much of the text in the legend is not legible (font and symbols too small)
  • same consideration for 222 (fig. 5)

188-213

  • the frequency of the wind direction is not crucial; it might play a role in highly complex topographical settings but apply rather to small areas while on large open areas the wind direction tend to be rather constant on longer periods considered

223-238

  • the second component of the formula βTn already shows the available area in the administrative unit; no need to correct it with αTn which takes into account the same variables
  • by doing this, you shrink the available area with the ratio derived from the same variables

239-246

  • the depreciation factor (αTn) has nothing to do with the mentioned Buffer Zone; to account for this more investigation in the mentioned laws is necessary

247

  • what questionnaire? it’s the first time in the paper that says that a questionnaire was used; it should have been mentioned before

254

  • I presume the term “mobility” here refers to roadways/railroads (density); the consistency of the terms should be maintained

263

  • nothing is mentioned about the methodology of putting all these indices together (operation, weights etc.)

297

  • there is no clear correspondence between the categories/groups in Table 2 and Table 7
  • the total per expert doesn’t add to 1.00 in most cases

298-314

  • the experts’ opinions about the importance of the paired (sub)criteria are not new; the results could have been obtained from the available rich and conclusive literature

319-320

  • sections 0, and 0 - should be more specific and linked to previous mentioning of the sections
  • or is it a mistake?

331

  • no explanation of how Average Global Priority is calculated

343

  • no number for the table mentioned

352

  • no size marker for the “Wind Farm” item

394

  • 23 - Rio Corrente Bay is mentioned before (row 391); now 23 is Metropolitan Salvador; this induces confusion

415

  • section 0? must be a mistake

Fig. 6 to 10

  • a scale and several landmarks (main cities, main rivers) would help the reader to make sense of the area

 

Author Response

Review 3:

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 4 Report

The authors carried out a good generalizing work, developed an algorithm and identified criteria for assessing the most efficient location of wind turbines.
Need to improve picture quality: fig.4,5,6.

The study was partially based on the opinion of experts, in connection with which the level of influence of the human factor is rather high.

Author Response

Thanks for the referee comments. Below comments and responses.

 

The authors carried out a good generalizing work, developed an algorithm and identified criteria for assessing the most efficient location of wind turbines.
Need to improve picture quality: fig.4,5,6. DONE

The study was partially based on the opinion of experts, in connection with which the level of influence of the human factor is rather high. Yes, inherent to the AHP process with specialists. But the sensibility analysis of AHP reduces this error.

 

 

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

All my concerns have been addressed and the revised manuscript is now acceptable after minor revision.

Author Response

Dear referee,

 

Thanks for the referee comments. Below comments and responses.

 

A new revision in English was made, and with that, the paper title was changed.

 

Best Regards.

Alex Santos

Reviewer 3 Report

 

Row/s

Comment

67-69

  • (previous: check the phrase continuity before and after brackets)
  • still the sentence sounds wrong: “... it is essential to include the opinions of local experts (...) have different opinions about …”; probably a “who” should be inserted after the brackets and before “experts”

156

  • (previous: what are CI and RCI in flowchart 2?)
  • the explanation of the acronyms should be mentioned where they appear in the text or as a note

(previous 170-171)

193-194

  • (previous: why wind speed values between 6.5 and 7 m/s are not taken into account?)
  • an explanation should be provided for why there is a gap between the wind speed classes considered for analysis; it is not self understood why that range is excluded (nor its existence, its break values or its length)

(previous 239-246)

262-269

  • (previous: the depreciation factor (αTn) has nothing to do with the mentioned Buffer Zone; to account for this more investigation in the mentioned laws is necessary)
  • still, there are no strong arguments over the validity of the depreciation factor (αTn) as it is defined in text and formula; consider bringing practical evidence of its value (could be also from the references)

(previous 352)

377 / Figure 7 (and 8, 9, 10)

  • (previous: no size marker for the “Wind Farm” item)
  • poor explanation provided; the moment you use different sizes for the dots it means that that information is important and should be referenced in the legend; it is a basic requirement in cartography; even at a rough level of approximation the reader should be able to estimate the number of wind farms

(previous 394)

416

  • (previous: 23 - Rio Corrente Bay is mentioned before (row 391); now 23 is Metropolitan Salvador; this induces confusion)
  • there is still a 23- Metropolitan Salvador in contrast with 23- Rio Corrente Bay mentioned in other places

Fig. 6 to 10

  • (previous: a scale and several landmarks (main cities, main rivers) would help the reader to make sense of the area)
  • these are basic requirements in cartography: to provide the scale and spatial reference; otherwise the results are already provided in Table 6; you opted for a map to enhance the presentation of the results but this has to be correctly built

Author Response

Dear referee,

 

Thanks for the referee comments. Below comments and responses (in the attached too).

 

A new revision in English was made, and with that, the paper title was changed.

 

Best Regards.

Alex Santos

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

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