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Research on Sustainable Development in an Alpine Pastoral Area Based on Equilibrium Analysis Between the Grassland Yield, Livestock Carrying Capacity, and Animal Husbandry Population

Sustainability 2019, 11(17), 4659; https://doi.org/10.3390/su11174659
by Jiping Zhang 1, Linbo Zhang 2, Xiaona Liu 1 and Qing Qiao 1,*
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Sustainability 2019, 11(17), 4659; https://doi.org/10.3390/su11174659
Submission received: 9 July 2019 / Revised: 9 August 2019 / Accepted: 19 August 2019 / Published: 27 August 2019
(This article belongs to the Section Environmental Sustainability and Applications)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The paper affords an interesting topic that is subject to be included in the scientific area of Sustainability Italian. Its attempt is to define the equilibrium of grassland yield, livestock carrying capacity and animal husbandry population for the influences on the ecological environment and sustainable development of pastoral areas. Undoubtedly, the way of affording the study is particularly complicate since when to establish quantitative relationship between theoretical livestock carrying capacity and suitable scale for animal husbandry population is not so easy. Anyway, the subject is particularly important for the considered area of China, and not only. The importance is with evidence related to the regional policies that must improve sustainability of pastoral systems.

Introduction, data and methods, discussion and conclusion in my opinion are well written and clear but need some improvement for English language.

 

Author Response

    Thank you very much for reviewing the article. Thanks for your agreement and encouragement. We have revised the article based on your opinions. In the future, we will conduct in-depth successive research based on your suggestions. The following is a description of the revision of the article according to you suggestion:

  We have supplemented the content of research background and added relevant literature. The English language has been carefully edited and modified.

Reviewer 2 Report

This is a basic article that can/should be continued by successive articles that would take a more variable focus to the life and business opportunities of the local herdsmen.

In this article, please, make sure that you write out all the abbreviations that you take to use (DEM, SU, hm2). There is some missing logic in the reference 2 (space of the year) 

Author Response

  Thank you very much for reviewing the article. Thanks for your agreement and encouragement. We have revised the article based on your opinions. In the future, we will conduct in-depth successive research based on your suggestions. The following is a description of the revision according to you suggestions:

  The successive research prospect you proposed is added to the “Discussion and Conclusion” part. The full name of the relevant abbreviations were added. The format of references (No.2) has been adjusted. The English language has been carefully edited and modified.

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