How Corporate Social Responsibility and External Stakeholder Concerns Affect Green Supply Chain Cooperation among Manufacturers: An Interpretive Structural Modeling Analysis
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Dear authors,
I very much enjoyed reading and examining your paper. The study addresses a research gap, is well designed and arrives at interesting conclusions. However, the paper still needs much work, especially regarding the English language. There are some too long and confusing sentences, missing words and many errors. Therefore, this paper needs professional English editing before publication.
Just a few examples:
-missing word: lines 10-11: «Thus, it is necessary to identify the influencing factors hinder the green supply chain cooperation..»
-too long and confusing sentence: lines 13-18: «In this paper, a set of 19 influencing factors in terms of corporate social responsibility as internal effects and external stakeholder concerns as external effects for green supply chain cooperation among manufacturers in China is established by consultation with supply chain management practitioners and academicians, and the interaction between these influencing factors and their effects on the green supply chain cooperation was analyzed by using the Interpretive Structural Modelling (ISM) approach.»
-spelling error: lines 19-20: «...how the effect work to help...»
-Wrong word: line 66: «cap» instead of «gap»
-missing words: «and they gradually prefer to consume the desired products that produced in an environmentally sustainable way»
-line 145: «drawn» instead of «draw»
-grammar: line 150: «The external stakeholders’ concern are associated»
-line 197: «China’s South-East coastal areas which is the most flourishing area»
-line 271: «dependence powers which seen in Table 4.»
-lines 280-281: «They are relatively disconnected from the system and are either strongly enhance the effect of other factors nor inhibit them.»
-line 284: wrong word: «week driving power» instead of «weak driving power»
-line 336: «saving. that»
-lines 347-348: missing words?: «Such classification is in accordance with that green supply chain cooperation has both internal feasibility and external necessity.»
line 360: «CSR refer to internal stakeholders includes owners, employees and...»
line 432: «cooperation among supplier.»
lines 446-447: «As the dominant influencing factors for the green supply chain cooperation is diagnosed,»
Author Response
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Reviewer 2 Report
Review Comments on Manuscript entitled:
"How Corporate Social Responsibility and External Stakeholder Concerns Affect Green Supply Chain Cooperation among Manufacturers: An Interpretive Structural Modeling Analysis "
The information flows harmoniously and keeps the logical thread of the research. A clean research, organized and strictly to the point.
Author Response
We made some modifications and editing of English language to improve paper quality.
Many thanks for your suggestions and help!
