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Absorption Capacity and Development of Photocatalyst Green Ceramic Products with Moderation of Green Environment for Sustainability Performance of Developing Industries

Sustainability 2022, 14(17), 10457; https://doi.org/10.3390/su141710457
by I Nyoman Normal 1 and Made Setini 2,*
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2:
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Sustainability 2022, 14(17), 10457; https://doi.org/10.3390/su141710457
Submission received: 3 July 2022 / Revised: 12 August 2022 / Accepted: 16 August 2022 / Published: 23 August 2022

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The authors need to explain the SME acronym referenced at the beginning of the paper. 

Please remove the abstract's broad generalizations: This research shows that the development of green products can be a perfect mediation in bridging the absorption capacity and business sustainability.

Review of the Literature - Authors need to reference the authors and not use [2,3] as the subject.  This needs a complete rewrite.  Also, do not just say the concepts to be measured were demonstrated by [ ].  This needs to be explained to demonstrate construct validity.   

Hypothesis Testing - Authors need to also state the null hypothesis as the statistical analyses demonstrates that you can reject the null, then accept the hypothesis.

Population - random sample or coonvenience?

Discuss construct validity and reliabilty.

Discuss limitations of the study and take care not to generalize.

 

 

Author Response

Dear Reviewers
Thank you very much for the advice given, so of course this article will be worth it. Hopefully the revisions that I do can be in accordance with the reviewer's suggestions.

Thank you once again

Best Regard

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

Lines 15 to 17, sentences must be corrected

Line 18, passive voice must be applied

Lines 99 to 106, sentences must be corrected. It is difficult to understand them.

Avoid the lots of use of "namely" in the paper (lines 133, 136, 137, 151)

Lines 150 to 152 must be corrected

Lines 169 , 185, 509, 614, Put 2 in subscript in CO2 and TiO2

Lines 234 to 236, the sentence is incomplete

Lines 283 to 284, correct the sentence

Line 298, an "s" is missing to word "emphasize"

Line 302, put a comma after the references

Lines 313 to 317, the sentence is not correct

Lines 328, 489, use the same presentation for the references

Lines 361 to 363, correct these two sentences

What's the link between H1, H2, H3, H4 and H5 with 2.5 and 2.6?

Lines 391 to 393, this sentence is not complete

Lines 398 to 401, this part must be rewritten

Lines 416 to 418, this part must be rewritten

Lines 431 to 432, the sentence must be rewritten

Line 481, what's the  number of the hypothesis?

Lines 511 to 512, this sentence is not complete

Lines 549 to 551, hese two sentences are not complete

Line 620 to 621, this sentence is not correct

Lines 675 to 677, this sentence must be rewritten

 

 

 

 

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

Dear Reviewers
Thank you very much for the advice given, so of course this article will be worth it. Hopefully the revisions that I do can be in accordance with the reviewer's suggestions.

Thank you once again

Best Regard

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 3 Report

Warto zgłosić się do korekty językowej

(Translation: It's worth submitting for language correction.)

Author Response

Dear Reviewers
Thank you very much for the advice given, so of course this article will be worth it. Hopefully the revisions that I do can be in accordance with the reviewer's suggestions.

Thank you once again

Best Regard

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

Thank you for your response.  Is line 38 correct? SME (Medium Small Business) - or is it Small Medium Business?

COVID-19 and Covid-19 are not used consistently throughout the paper, small issue but it jumps out when you read the paper.   

Reviewer 2 Report

Nothing

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