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The Effects of Social Networking Services on Tourists’ Intention to Visit Mega-Events during the Riyadh Season: A Theory of Planned Behavior Model

Sustainability 2022, 14(21), 14481; https://doi.org/10.3390/su142114481
by Dayal Ali W. Al-Khaldy 1, Thowayeb H. Hassan 1,2,*, Ahmed Hassan Abdou 1,3, Mostafa A. Abdelmoaty 4,* and Amany E. Salem 1,2
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2:
Josep Maria Prat Forga
Sustainability 2022, 14(21), 14481; https://doi.org/10.3390/su142114481
Submission received: 20 October 2022 / Revised: 1 November 2022 / Accepted: 2 November 2022 / Published: 4 November 2022
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Sustainability of Festivals and Events)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The article present an interesting research about intention to participate to mega-events. There are several changes required

1.1. Introduction 30 Events have been well-established 

C-please define the events if you use it as first term, otherwise it has a general meaning here 

Please rewrite  sentences so to have shorter sentences For instance  There are a number of reasons governments and 87 societies attempt to attract and develop mega-events, but general economic considerations 88 are the primary factor, which includes generating foreign exchange earnings, boosting 89 GDP and employment, as well as creating new economic opportunities [12].

is a long sentence

There has been in the brakets before.... the use of theory of planned  behavior (TPB) line 113

 (TPB) is considered one of the best conceptual theories line 114

please replace with conceptual frameworks (it is not conceptual theories)

line 180-Hypothesis 1 (H1): Attitude toward mega-events can significantly influence tourists’ in‐ Please remove can from the hypotheses. For all

-3.1. Study procedures and the used instrument 203 A survey-based study was carried out among potential visitors of the Riyadh Season. 204

Please specify the period of the study-due to COVID-19 crisis it is important to specify

Gender Female 194 (60.8%) Male

Please change gender to Sex

Cα   Please let just α

At limitations-Please discuss the limitations dur to the selection sample msuch as conveninece sampling

Please insert at limitation  -Different variables that were not measured such as the  perceptions of risk for COVID-19 infection or vaccination status  (doi: 10.3390/ijerph19020918) may influence the intention to travel. Further studies should take into account these variables.

Author Response

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Reviewer 2 Report

I think that the article is well developed

Author Response

We appreciate the time and effort that the reviewer has dedicated to providing valuable feedback on the manuscript. We are grateful to the reviewer for the comment on our paper.

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