Study on the Spatial Differentiation Characteristics and Influencing Factors of China’s Economic Resilience under Different Shocks
, Xinhuan Zhang 1,2, Danni Lu 1,2, Mingjie Cui 1,2, Rongqian Lu 1,2 and Yaning Chen 1,2Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Very actual topic, average text quality of the article. The main problem is, too few informations about research data and how are these data connected with imput of formulas. Missing Conclussion
abstract
- add some numerical results
chapter 2.2 data
- can you be more specific about data? How many records in total? How many attributes for each record, you can write name of attributes.
chapter 2.1 Research Methodology
- formula (1): is it absolute value in the denominator of the fraction ? If yes, it should be higher. Or it is simply [ ] ? if it is [ ], it should be removed
- you should remove [ ] from the numerator of the fraction of the formula (1)
- end of the lines 108 and 109, What are the strange symbols between Ept and Ept-k
Disscussion
- you should compare your results with at least other related works (at least 5, I recomand 10), it can be from other countries than from China
Conclussion
- this chapter is compleatly missing
References
- try add some more actual related works (2021 - 2022), it can be from other countries than from China
Minor comments
- page 3, line 60 Martin[5] --> Martin [5]
- page 3, line 67 Frenken[11]classifies - add spaces before and after [11]
- page 3, line 75 Aarstad[12] --> Aarstad [12]
- you use sometimes spaces before [] and sometimes not, you should have same style in the whole article, I recommand all with spaces
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Reviewer 2 Report
The manuscript addresses important current issues related to the analysis of spatial diversity and factors influencing China's economic resilience under various shocks.
The literature review is incomplete. Please refer to a larger number of scientific publications (including the latest from 2022) that are related to the topic of the manuscript.
Please remove obvious errors, e.g. "Articl" at the beginning of the manuscript.
Please adapt the manuscript to the journal requirements, because there are many minor errors in it, e.g. no spaces in front of the brackets:
- "Frenken[11]classifies industrial structure diversity into related diversity and..."
- "Aarstad[12] argues that unrelated diversity is a negative..." - this error occurs in many places.
Please also pay attention to the captions under the figures, e.g. "Figure 3: Moran scatter plot of regional economic resilience" There is no full stop at the end of the title and "Figure 3" should be followed by a period, not a colon.
Please distinguish the Conclusions chapter at the end of the manuscript. In this chapter, please emphasize the importance of the analyzes carried out in the manuscript and indicate what is new in the article (which has not been seen in other publications so far). I think that some of the text from the current Discussion chapter can be used in this chapter.
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Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
I am fine with this version of the article, the authors solved all my comments
Reviewer 2 Report
The revised manuscript may be accepted in present form.
