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Digital Transformation Drives Sustainable Innovation Capability Improvement in Manufacturing Enterprises: Based on FsQCA and NCA Approaches

Sustainability 2023, 15(1), 542; https://doi.org/10.3390/su15010542
by Xiaonan Fan, Ye Wang * and Xinyuan Lu
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2:
Sustainability 2023, 15(1), 542; https://doi.org/10.3390/su15010542
Submission received: 14 November 2022 / Revised: 15 December 2022 / Accepted: 16 December 2022 / Published: 28 December 2022

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

 

Reviewer Comments

 

Digital Transformation Drives Sustainable Innovation Capability Improvement in Manufacturing Companies: Based on FsQCA and NCA Approaches.

Manuscript Number sustainability-2063339

 

1.      The abstract needs to be improved.  Currently the abstract looks incomplete and does not give the proper focus of the research. . Abstract should be structured with a focus on the main concerns and general justification for the work; subject of study and main factors affecting it; methods and procedures; main results; and general conclusion.The authors should read some good papers of the journal and re write it.

 

2.     The introduction is weak. The motivation for the research is missing. 

 

3.     The author should highlight the research objectives of the research in the introduction separately. Also, how the authors would address their need to be mentioned.

 

4.     The manuscript lacks flow. The authors should make more efforts in presenting the work more systematically and clearly. The authors(s) have cited old citations throughout the manuscript.  The author(s) are also suggested to includes references from the latest publications (year 2022).

 

5.     The implications are less developed. The authors should provide more insights on it.

 

6.     The introduction lacks in gaining attention and highlighting the need of the study. The author(s) should mention research objectives of the research separately. 

 

7.     The findings of the study need to be more elaborate. This section needs to be developed and supported by previous work. The discussion needs to be improvised with a theoretical contribution.The findings of the discussion need to be strengthened with the previous research work. 

 

8.     The discussion needs to be improvised with theoretical contribution. 

 

9.     The conclusion is very weak. It should also be an extrapolation of the key findings from the research and not a summary. So, there should be conclusions around the background theory, data theory/analysis and, key outcomes. The authors should have included the following sub-sections within the conclusion section with more details: 

        Implications to theory and practice should be clearly stated; 

        Key lessons learnt; 

        Limitations of this research;

 

10.  The selection of the case location should be more elaborated.

 

11.   Proofread the whole manuscript as many typos and grammar errors are present.

 

12.  Future research directions should be improved; in that, they should stem from the awareness of the limitations and opening avenues related to the obtained outcomes

 

 

13.  Author(s) should try to include some novel implications and unique contributions in the paper.

 

 

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Reviewer 2 Report

Title:

Digital Transformation Drives Sustainable Innovation Capability Improvement in Manufacturing Companies: Based on FsQCA and NCA Approaches.

Comments:

1. The authors have added many quantitative statistics for the aformentioned approaches. It is recommend to add a graphical comparison as well. (i.e. curves and figures)

2. The paper novelty is low. The authors are advised to highlight the main contribution in the introduction.

3 Why you put a new information after "Conclusion" ? (i.e. Section6: Theoretical contributions)

If you wish, you can add appendix. But, keep all investegations before the "Conclusion" section.

Author Response

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Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

The authors have incorporated the changes asked. In my opinion, the manuscript is fit for publication.

Author Response

We are very honored to get your recognition for this work.We have re-read the full text and corrected the grammar and typos of the article to improve the quality of the manuscript.

Reviewer 2 Report

Please submit the clean version before a final decision.

Author Response

We are very honored to get your recognition foe this manuscript. We have re-read the full text and corrected the grammar and typos of the article to improve the quality of the manuscript.

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