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Food Waste and Environmental Sustainability of the Hotel Industry in Taiwan

Sustainability 2023, 15(21), 15459; https://doi.org/10.3390/su152115459
by Hsu-Hua Lee and Pao-Yuan Huang *
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Sustainability 2023, 15(21), 15459; https://doi.org/10.3390/su152115459
Submission received: 12 September 2023 / Revised: 27 October 2023 / Accepted: 27 October 2023 / Published: 30 October 2023

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

 

Thank you for allowing me to review Food Waste and Environmental Sustainability of the Hotel Industry in Taiwan. I read this study very interestingly as a professor related to food service.

This study is very timely and will receive attention. I hope this research will be more valuable, and I'm giving you some advice.

 

 

-In the introduction, it is necessary to deal with previous studies on food waste, not limited to specific regions. The critical review of prior studies and the differentiation of this study should be emphasized.

 

 

-The discussion should serve to interpret the findings of this study compared to existing literature to provide readers with a deeper understanding and to emphasize the importance and contribution of the study.

 

- Increase the value of this study by presenting theoretical contributions and expandability in theoretical implications.

- Describe the practical implications based on the findings. Ex) Consumers, Promotion, Unforeseen factors, etc.

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Greetings. I sincerely appreciate the time and effort you've dedicated to reviewing my manuscript and offering invaluable suggestions. Due to the length of the response, I have chosen to reply in a PDF format. Please find the attached document for your reference, and kindly share any further insights or feedback.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Comments for  Manuscript ID sustainability-2635121

 


This paper  study Food Waste and Environmental Sustainability of the Hotel Industry in Taiwan. Apart from this research contribution to the body of knowledge, it requires significant changes. The article needs to incorporate the comments given by the reviewer in each section. 

Use the following guidelines for writing abstract and introduction section

Introduction


Restructure your introduction according to this pattern and need to be more comprehensive
1. State the research problem.
2. Review studies that have addressed the problem.
3. Indicate deficiencies in the studies.
4. Advance the significance of the study for particular audiences.
5. State the purpose statement

 After reading introduction section I can’t find relevant work conducted in  Hotel Industry of Taiwan. To justify the context, you must give a clear background detail. 

Research objectives 
Please state your research objectives clearly.


Research Significance 

- Please provide significance and highlight the research gap and explain theoretical support and justification. Please justify your study significance based on previous studies. Please include a separate section and discuss this part. 

Literature Review 
Please first explain and describe  each  variable and how you define and operationalize them. 

Discussion and findings 

Please expand your discussion section. You need to compare your results and findings with other research studies relevant to yours. Not just exampling your results. Then you can discuss both theoretical and practical implications. 

 

Conclusion 

There is no conclusion section. After all you must conclude your work. Please add on details and comprehensive conclusion.

 

References

Please add studies relevant to Taiwan  hotel industry context. Your current references list must be expanded. 

Comments on the Quality of English Language

Moderate editing of English language required

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Greetings. I sincerely appreciate the time and effort you've dedicated to reviewing my manuscript and offering invaluable suggestions. Due to the length of the response, I have chosen to reply in a PDF format. Please find the attached document for your reference, and kindly share any further insights or feedback.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 3 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

In reviewing the manuscript titled 'Food Waste and Environmental Sustainability of the Hotel Industry in Taiwan,' it is evident that the study addresses an important and timely topic. However, there is a need for improvement in several key areas to enhance the manuscript's clarity and overall contribution to the field. My suggestions are as follows:

a.     Introduction Clarity: The introduction section is well-written but could benefit from a more concise and focused presentation of the research problem and objectives. Provide a clear and succinct research question or hypothesis at the beginning.

b.     Literature Review: There is no review section. Include recent literature on the topic to demonstrate the relevance and currency of your research.

c.      Methodology: Provide a more detailed explanation of the Analytic Network Process (ANP) methodology, especially for readers who may not be familiar with it. This will help in understanding how the research was conducted. Include information about the selection process for the hotel respondents, such as the criteria used for choosing specific hotels.

d.     Discussion and Implications: Expand on the practical implications of the research. How can hotels use this information to reduce food waste effectively? Also, corroborate your findings with previous studies and provide actionable recommendations.

 

e.     Conclusion: The conclusion should portray philosophical bearings from what is obtained or discovered in the empirical findings of the study. Summarize the key findings concisely and restate their importance in addressing the research problem. More theoretical and practical implications should be suggested.

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Greetings. I sincerely appreciate the time and effort you've dedicated to reviewing my manuscript and offering invaluable suggestions. Due to the length of the response, I have chosen to reply in a PDF format. Please find the attached document for your reference, and kindly share any further insights or feedback.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

 

Previous comments are not fully addressed. Discussion and findings are a separate section later; at the end, we put a conclusion. Don't merge it together. Please follow the comments below.   

Discussion and findings 

Please expand your discussion section. You need to compare your results and findings with other research studies relevant to yours. Not just examining your results. Then, you can discuss both theoretical and practical implications. 

 

Conclusion 

There is no conclusion section. After all, you must conclude your work. Please add details and a comprehensive conclusion. 

 

Comments on the Quality of English Language

Please edit the language to improve the quality of writing. 

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

    I sincerely appreciate the time and effort you've dedicated to reviewing my manuscript and offering invaluable suggestions. Due to the length of the response, I have chosen to reply in a PDF format. Please find the attached document for your reference, and kindly share any further insights or feedback.

Best regards,"

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

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