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Can “Internet Plus” Enhance the Green Transition? The Moderating Roles of Environmental Regulation and Sewage Fee-to-Tax

Sustainability 2023, 15(4), 2854; https://doi.org/10.3390/su15042854
by Zongwei Li 1,*, Jianing Chen 1 and Yanhui Zhang 2
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2:
Sustainability 2023, 15(4), 2854; https://doi.org/10.3390/su15042854
Submission received: 16 October 2022 / Revised: 13 January 2023 / Accepted: 1 February 2023 / Published: 4 February 2023
(This article belongs to the Section Economic and Business Aspects of Sustainability)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Thank you for letting me be the reviewer. I've enjoyed reading this article. There are rooms need to be imporved as follow:

1. The introduction is not convincing enough to draw reader's attention. I would recommend the authors to strengthen your research gap and also objectives.

2. Literature review part should be updated to be more up-to-date.

3. There are no clear directions in term of methodology section. You should have explained what method you used to collect the data, how has the data selected, the step of analysing the data, bias prevention and also whether this article passed the ethics committee? 

4. Discussion should be compatible with literature reviews and conceptual framework.

5. Emphasized on the novelty of the research is a MUST. 

Author Response

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Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

Dear author(s),

Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper.  I agree that this is an important and pertinent topic. Although the idea is a good one, unfortunately, the way in which the study is operationalized holds back its potential contribution.  There are a few areas where I would encourage the authors to give further thought, as follows:

  • Theoretical literature has not been considered and reviewed. It’s better to observe the connection between the contents. Try to explain everything except the topics in order to establish the necessary coherence.
  • Theoretical Development: The literature review must engage in the constructs of your analytical framing in a meaningful way. The literature review section could be improved by being more analytical. In other words, building on the existing literature to highlight what is missing and what is yet to be done and in so doing outline the theoretical puzzles or debates to which this work contributes. I have concerns related to theoretical development, and note the need for a more rigorous critique of the literature to help deepen the theoretical underpinnings of the study.

·        The discussion section should be separate from the results section. The discussion challenges your findings and determines the degree of compatibility with previous research.

·       The discussion challenges your findings and determines the degree of compatibility with previous research.

·       The discussion section needs to highlight what is new in your findings and what we can learn from a study conducted in this interesting and understudied context. Whilst the introduction sets the stage for the study by justifying the relevance of the study, the discussion is the most important section as it is in the discussion that it is all brought together, and the authors illustrates how and why the study findings advance the literature. Therefore, the discussion needs to illustrate the new insights—the contributions—in a clear and compelling manner. In other words, illustrate what we know now that we did not know before or, in effect, to clearly illustrate the contribution of the study to the different bodies of literature. Furthermore, what are the future research directions based on this new framework?  

·       Theoretical Contributions: Addressing all the points mentioned above will lead to a more in-depth presentation of your data which has a clearer theoretical contribution. What is the theoretical contributions?  

 

·        What are the theoretical and practical implications of your study and which limitations and possible future research emerge from it?

Author Response

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Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

This is ok but the English proof reading is required.

Reviewer 2 Report

Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper.  

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