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The Relationship of the Religious Faith and Practice of Student Youth and Adults in Southeastern Poland and Western Ukraine with Their Health Status and Attitudes toward Physical Culture

Religions 2024, 15(7), 756; https://doi.org/10.3390/rel15070756
by Wojciech J. Cynarski 1, Stanisław Dyndał 2, Jacek Wąsik 3, Dariusz Mosler 4, Iuliia Pavlova 5, Jong-Hoon Yu 6, Tadeusz Ambroży 7, Krzysztof Kasicki 8,* and Łukasz Rydzik 7
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Religions 2024, 15(7), 756; https://doi.org/10.3390/rel15070756
Submission received: 30 May 2024 / Revised: 17 June 2024 / Accepted: 19 June 2024 / Published: 21 June 2024
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Sport and Religion: Continuities, Connections, Concerns)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

I congratulate the author/authors on the choice of the research problem of their study. The topic of the relationship of religiosity to physical, mental, moral and spiritual health is constantly topical and still requires new thoughts in the current cultural context. The novelty of this article is the presentation of specific results of quantitative research on a sample of 1,456 people - mainly young people in the region of southeastern Poland (Podkarpacie and Malopolska) and western Ukraine (Lviv region). The results of the study are not representative of the entire population of the selected region. Rather, they are illustrative of the phenomenon of the relationship between the two realities indicated above (religious faith - health) based on the statements of a rather large group of respondents. This should be made clear in the description of the method used. It is worth appreciating the multidisciplinary nature of this study. Elements of theology and philosophy of man are combined here in one research paradigm with elements of sociology, social psychology and pedagogy. In my opinion, the manuscript needs a significant structural adjustment: after the introduction and the research problem (5 research questions), there should be a description of the method and materials, followed by the results of own research, discussion and conclusions. Such an order of the manuscript seems clear and logical. Unintelligible is the current order in the manuscript first the presentation of research results and after them the presentation of the method. In addition, it is unnecessary in the development of the size of the article to present the research tool in the appendix (survey questionnaire). After this correction, the article will meet the requirements of the journal and can be published in “Religions”.

Author Response

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Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

dear colleague thank you very much for opportunity to review of your scientific article:

The relationship of the religious faith and practice of student youth and adults in southeastern Poland and western Ukraine with their health status and attitudes toward physical culture 

The aim: to determine the relationships of the religious faith and practice of student youth and adults in Poland (Podkarpacie and Lesser Poland regions) and in western Ukraine (Lviv region) with the self-rated health status and their attitudes toward physical culture. 

1. VERY WELL STRUCTURED ARTICLE

2. Limitations of the study - OK 

3. Authors explain their paper in many contexts.

4, Authors are experts who understand this problem and they have passion for this topic. 

5. 

recommendations for change and correction: 

Keywords: relationship, health, faith, religiosity, physical culture, Western Ukraina.  

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please compare: 

(Wojciech J. Cynarski, 2014),   -  W.J Cynarski 

please one system : Cynarski 

it is important to add:  quality of life  definition , concpets

health culture, - line 92  - ADD  paragraphs about QoL

https://www.actamissiologica.com/sub/am_2_2023.pdf 

line 95:  faith means ethical behaviour : 

compare: Kondrla, P., & Pavlikova, M. (2016). From formal ethics to existential ethics. European Journal of Science and Theology, 12(3), 101-111.

as Catholic, i.e, members of the 98 Roman Catholic Church.  - correct . 

(Kosiewicz, 1988; Wojtyła, 1969, Wegiel, G 2009)  ?  - please explain me system year or alphabet order ??? 

 

Acta Missiologica: Przemysław Kisiel, Piotr Kroczek, Paweł Ulman : 103 - 113 

https://www.actamissiologica.com/sub/am_1_2024.pdf 

EXAMINING RELIGIOUS LIFE FROM A MULTIDISCIPLINARY PERSPECTIVE. REFLECTION ON THE SOCIAL FUNCTIONING OF THE ANNULMENT OF MARRIAGE IN THE EXAMPLE OF RESEARCH CONDUCTED IN POLAND

388: Public Opinion Research Center (CBOS) 

change :  line FIRST MENTIONE - 97   

 

 

Author Response

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Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

satisfied 

 

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