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Assessment of the Effectiveness, Socio-Economic Impact and Implementation of a Digital Solution for Patients with Advanced Chronic Diseases: The ADLIFE Study Protocol

Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2023, 20(4), 3152; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph20043152
by Borja García-Lorenzo 1,*,†, Ania Gorostiza 1, Nerea González 1,2, Igor Larrañaga 1, Maider Mateo-Abad 1,3, Ana Ortega-Gil 1, Janika Bloemeke 4, Oliver Groene 4, Itziar Vergara 3, Javier Mar 1,5,6,7,8, Sarah N. Lim Choi Keung 9,10, Theodoros N. Arvanitis 9,10,11, Rachelle Kaye 12, Elinor Dahary Halevy 12, Baraka Nahir 12,13, Fritz Arndt 14, Anne Dichmann Sorknæs 15, Natassia Kamilla Juul 15, Mikael Lilja 16, Marie Holm Sherman 17, Gokce Banu Laleci Erturkmen 18, Mustafa Yuksel 18, Tim Robbins 11, Ioannis Kyrou 11, Harpal Randeva 11, Roma Maguire 19, Lisa McCann 19, Morven Miller 19, Margaret Moore 19, John Connaghan 19, Ane Fullaondo 1, Dolores Verdoy 1,† and Esteban de Manuel Keenoy 1 on behalf of the ADLIFE Study Groupadd Show full author list remove Hide full author list
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Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2023, 20(4), 3152; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph20043152
Submission received: 1 December 2022 / Revised: 20 January 2023 / Accepted: 7 February 2023 / Published: 10 February 2023
(This article belongs to the Section Digital Health)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

This is an interesting and well-designed research protocol. I wish the content of the protocol a successful implementation. I'd like to leave you with a few comments in this regard.

1) How do you plan to solve the problem of uniformity of interventions across the 7 pilot test sites?

2) [line 129] It would be good if an explanation for a propensitiy score was added.

3) [line 180] More specific comments is needed on what the patient recruitment period will be like.

4) [line 213] How can you eusure anonymity?

5) [line 318] Is it appropriate to set the ER visit as the primary outcome?

Author Response

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Reviewer 2 Report

Thank you for the opportunity to review this article entitled "Assessment of the effectiveness, socio-economic impact and implementation of a digital solution for patients with advanced chronic diseases: The ADLIFE study protocol"

Overall, I believe this study serve as a body of literature regarding this area of study regarding the QoL of patients with advanced diseases, using ED visit as a surrogate variable. However, the methods are not clear and largely needed to be edited.

1. The authors stated that they aimed to evaluate whether ADLIFE intervention is able to deliver appropriate care. I'm afraid that by using this non-randomized study between ADLIFE intervention and standard of care (SoC) would address this issue. Patients in ADLIFE group are totally received the different intervention (compared to the current intervention) which may lead to some selection bias.

2. Also, the authors will selected a control group retrospectively from the propensity score based on age, sex, ER visit, and hospital admission. Then, they will use an ER visit as a primary outcome? I can't following this reason. Please clarify.

3. Since this is a multi-center study, a control group would be selected from all sites, making it "heterogenous." Also, the SoC protocol are supposed to be different across all study sites? Please explain more in details about the SoC.

4. I could not understand section 2.5 outcomes. The primary outcome stated is the number of ER visits which will be presented as an average number of ER visits. I believe this action is not a standardized action when evaluating this variable. It should be the total number of ER visits in a pre-specified period?

5. Please explain the first paragraph in the section 2.5. Why do you want to explain this? It's hard for the readers to follow this section like this.

6. I am not a statisticians, but the section 2.9 analysis is too confused to follow. Please consider revise it.

Minor points

7. Please revise figure 1 or consider remove it

8. The authors mention "section c/line 126, section 2/line 212" Please consider revise or edit

9. Line 123: Ref [48] is probably a typo error.

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