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Water Footprint as a Tool for Selection of Alternatives (Comments on “Food Recommendations for Reducing Water Footprint”)

Sustainability 2022, 14(10), 6317; https://doi.org/10.3390/su14106317
by Libor Ansorge * and Lada Stejskalová
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Sustainability 2022, 14(10), 6317; https://doi.org/10.3390/su14106317
Submission received: 29 April 2022 / Revised: 13 May 2022 / Accepted: 18 May 2022 / Published: 22 May 2022
(This article belongs to the Section Sustainable Water Management)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

REVIEW of the manuscript titled:

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 Water footprint as a tool for selection of alternatives (Comments on “Food Recommendations for Reducing Water Footprint”)

Please find some of my observations.

            The title is descriptive, and it draws attention to the subject on which the authors have focused.

            The abstract is a concise summary of research conducted. The opinion presents the views of researchers on the strengths of the water footprint, from point of view blue, green, and gray. The authors extend these recommendations to the food industry. Do not add any citations in the abstract. It is recommended to change that phrase.

            The structure of the paper was organized in several sections. Introduction provide background information with a brief summary of existing literature. The main body of the article it refers to the significance of the individual components, by color, of the water footprint in terms of the sustainability of food production and their evaluation criteria. The topic is relevant and interesting. The water footprint associated with food production varies depending on factors that vary widely. How do the authors see that studies can be relevant in such different conditions - geographical area, season, gastronomic culture, authenticity of recipes, etc which can be difficult to interpret?

In the conclusions section, the authors summarize the arguments presented, but the support of these statements should be better proven.

In addition, summarize the applications and implications of your opinions, why would it be so important in the food industry.

Strengths

- presents an update on the water footprint, from the point of view of researchers, showing where we are now and how we can approach it in the future.

- the subject is in the topic of the journal.

- the bibliographic referencing is significant for this type of article.

Weaknesses

- the chosen criteria for the water footprint perspective are general.

- it is necessary to present pros (and cons) for choosing the field of application - the food industry.

Author Response

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Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

The manuscript “Water footprint as a tool for the selection of alternatives (Comments on “Food recommendations to reduce the Water Footprint”)” is an interesting work and with a very successful option; however, it is necessary to check the spelling. It is necessary to attend to the comments (document) to improve the structure of the work and its quality.

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

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Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

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