Qualified Health Claim Language affects Purchase Intentions for Green Tea Products in the United States
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
I want to congratulate to the authors for their work. It was a pleasure to me read the paper. The paper is pretty clear, well-structured and present very well the present state-of-art of health claims in the US. The methodology used by the authors is simple but with powerful results and implications. The main contribution of the paper is expanding the literature about consumers' preferences about health claims and indirectly with the fighting against non-communicable diseases.
I only suggest to the authors check few typos. The first one, on page 2, line 54 and 82. The first phrase must be a subheading and do not part of the paragraph. The second one, page 7, line 160, abbreviators 'HBM' and 'HCF' wasn't defined before.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer 1, Thank you very much for your review and suggestions. We are pleased that you enjoyed reading our paper. We have addressed the issues that you identified, which are outlined in the table below. Thank you again.
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2 | 54 | The first phrase must be a subheading and do not part of the paragraph. | Thank you for catching this error. We have addressed the issue with appropriate formatting. | Line 55: 1.1. Consumer research about Qualified Health Claims. |
2 | 82 | The first phrase must be a subheading and do not part of the paragraph. | Thank you for catching this error. We have addressed the issue with appropriate formatting. | Line 83: 1.2. The evolving Qualified Health Claim for the green tea and cancer relationship. |
7 | 160 | Abbreviators 'HBM' and 'HCF' wasn't defined before. | Thank you for pointing this out. We mistakenly did not include abbreviations in the earlier text and have made this edit. | Line 147: The modifying factors identified in the Health Belief Model (HBM) include… Line 149-50: Dependent variables were identified based on stakeholder interests and from the Health Claims Framework (HCF)… |
Reviewer 2 Report
Nutrients-487122 Qualified Health Claim Language affects Purchase Intentions for Green
Tea Products in the United States
General comment: This study was aimed at exploring how the purchase intent of a sample of older U.S. consumers was influenced by the content of qualified health claims on the green tea – breast/prostate cancer relationship and a fictitious yyukichi fruit juice - of gastrocoridalis. The empirical data were collected from an online experiment was administered to a convenience sample of 1,335 U.S. consumers 55 years or older. In my view, the study provides some new and potentially relevant information on purchase intent toward products that might consider carrying a qualified health claim with very weak scientific evidence. Yet, the value of the manuscript has been severely diminished by many inaccurate and confusing statements and statements that lack justification, which in turn raise significant concern in my mind about the overall trustworthiness of the manuscript. Below are examples of such statements and some other comments.
Inaccurate and confusing statements and statements that must be justified
Table 3, Lines 175-176, Line 231: where is the justification for the “correspondence” between the 0-to-12 scale and FDA’s QHC classification? Unless the correspondence has been used by the FDA or established in the scientific literature, it is misleading to present it in the study because it would create the erroneous impression that such a correspondence does exist. Furthermore, FDA’s review of QHC evidence is based on many aspects of evidence, e.g., quantity, quality, nature of study. But the labels used in the study, minimal, some, and complete do not accurately characterize the FDA algorithm.
Table 6, Model 1: why is the FDA prostate QHC chosen as the reference claim? This choice may have significant implications for the interpretation of the study because, unlike other claims examined, both 2005 P and 2005 B claims mention only one cancer rather than both cancers. By using the 2005 P claim as the reference claim, the comparison may have been affected by not only the language but also the content of claims. And, it is not clear if there is a way to disentangle between the two effects. Hence, the reference claim raises question about the validity of the most important findings.
Lines 190-193: it is difficult to understand the analytic strategy used. The paper states here “non-significant variables were withheld from entry into the final regression model analysis and significant predictors were added as blocks to examine their contribution to explained variance.” Yet, why are non-significant variables still included in the “final” models, e.g., Models 1 and 2 in Table 6. Furthermore, both the Results and the Summary sections discuss findings on “non-significant” variables and findings that are significant at the early steps of modeling but become not significant at the final steps, e.g., Lines 373-376. The existence of such confusion appears to make the manuscript exceedingly and unnecessarily difficult to follow.
Table 1: what is the “N”? (1) If the total sample (1,335) was split into two product groups (green tea 666 and yyukichi fruit juice 669) and each study participant saw only one product, then the “green tea” sample could not have the sample size as stated in the table. (2) The source of this footnote must be identified and referenced: “*As deemed by the US Food and Drug Administration.”
Line 45: the correct claim language ends with “in later life,” not “later in life.”
Line 61: it does not appear that Ref 11 and 12 investigated any “A level” claims.
Lines 91 and 93: Who “rejected” the claim(s) must be identified.
Table 2: are the labels for the two “familiarity” variables misplaced?
Throughout the paper: the term “functional food” is often used and there appears to be a presumption that both studied products are functional food. Yet, the term is never defined and there is no discussion of why either product is considered a functional food.
Line 200: are these “dependent” measures not “independent” measures?
Line 224: where does the 9.3% come from? What is the denominator?
Other comments
Line 51: suggest adding one or two examples of a disclaimer.
Table 1: suggest clarifying somewhere which claims are petitioned and unlawfully used.
Lines 103-104: cannot find where this is discussed in the Results and/or Summary section: “We also clarify whether the current QHC, permitted by the FDA, increases consumer purchase intentions for green tea products in comparison with claims no longer in use.”
Line 182: Is a linear regression (assuming it means an ordinary least squares regression) the appropriate statistical model for dependent variables in this study? All dependent variables are on a discrete and ordered measure. Could alternative models such as an ordered logistic/probit model better match the dependent variables?
Lines 207-211: suggest adding information on the response rate or the cooperation rate, i.e., how many panelists were invited to participate?
Table 4: note that percentages are in parentheses.
Lines 262 and 416: explain what the “other factors” are or may be.
Line 281, why is this finding “as expected”?
Table 6: what do * and ** denote?
Line 428: could an attempt be made to explain how the language of a claim could make a difference in purchase intent by speculating the focus of the various claims, i.e., how they describe the strength of the “evidence” and how their disclaim language differs?
Author Response
Dear Reviewer 2, Thank you very much for your detailed review. We addressed your concerns throughout the paper. Please see the table below with a detailed response to your inquiries and suggestions. Thank you again for your diligence.
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3 | 175-6;231 | where is the justification for the “correspondence” between the 0-to-12 scale and FDA’s QHC classification? Unless the correspondence has been used by the FDA or established in the scientific literature, it is misleading to present it in the study because it would create the erroneous impression that such a correspondence does exist. Furthermore, FDA’s review of QHC evidence is based on many aspects of evidence, e.g., quantity, quality, nature of study. But the labels used in the study, minimal, some, and complete do not accurately characterize the FDA algorithm. | Thank you. Sure. We will explain our logic behind the question and response scale per your comment. And thank you, we’ve also added this reference to our manuscript to reflect your query. The 13-point scale is based, in-part, on the rationale in Murphy, 2005 where he stated “It therefore was necessary to establish a rationale for determining which score, or range of scores, on the questionnaire’s seven-point certainty scale should correspond to each of FDA’s four designated levels of scientific support. Although the system that was adopted is somewhat arbitrary and not necessarily superior to other possible assignment rules, it does appear reasonable and internally consistent” (pg. 16). We recognize that the scale may be imperfect but to further explain our logic: we initially created a semantic differential scale of 0 to 100, where zero = no evidence and 100 = complete evidence. We agreed 100 points were too many and that scale descriptors would alleviate response burden. First, we selected the scale descriptors from existing FDA enforcement letters and avoided QHC language. We reduced the scale to 13 points to offer respondents a middle choice and to separate the scale into four, 3-point sections (A-D), plus 0 for no evidence. | Lines 182-84: The 13-point evidence scale was collapsed to correspond with the grades of evidence from the FDA ranking system where 0 corresponded to “No evidence”; 1-3 a “D”; 4-6 a “C”; 7-9 a “B”; and 10-12 an “A” (Table 3) []. Lines 242-44: Overall, participants rated the level of evidence as a “2” (i.e. D-grade) in both conditions (Table 3) and when the 12-point scale of evidence was collapsed into four grades of evidence, the results are consistent with FDA’s evaluation of the scientific evidence42 []. | |
6 | why is the FDA prostate QHC chosen as the reference claim? This choice may have significant implications for the interpretation of the study because, unlike other claims examined, both 2005 P and 2005 B claims mention only one cancer rather than both cancers. By using the 2005 P claim as the reference claim, the comparison may have been affected by not only the language but also the content of claims. And, it is not clear if there is a way to disentangle between the two effects. Hence, the reference claim raises question about the validity of the most important findings. | Thank you for your inquiry. Table 1 lists the seven QHCs in this study. Three claims were written by the manufacturer and were rejected by the FDA, so these claims are scientifically inaccurate (i.e. 2004, 2008, 2010) and therefore, not selected as a reference group. Three claims were written by the FDA (i.e. 2005p, 2005b, 2011). The 2011 QHC disclaimer [“FDA does not agree that green tea may reduce that risk because there is very little scientific evidence for the claim”] was found to negate the claimed relationship by the federal court. It was therefore not selected as a reference group. The 2005p and 2005b QHCs were written by the FDA and are scientifically accurate. We chose 2005p instead 2005b since the mean evidence rating was the lowest (M=2.43 – Table 5) and demonstrated the greatest completion rate (n=211). The 2012 claim was written by the court and part of our research was to understand how responses to this claim compared with scientifically accurate claims (i.e. 2005p, 2005b) and inaccurate claims (i.e. 2004, 2008, 2010, 2011). | |||
190-3; 373-6 | it is difficult to understand the analytic strategy used. The paper states here “non-significant variables were withheld from entry into the final regression model analysis and significant predictors were added as blocks to examine their contribution to explained variance.” Yet, why are non-significant variables still included in the “final” models, e.g., Models 1 and 2 in Table 6. Furthermore, both the Results and the Summary sections discuss findings on “non-significant” variables and findings that are significant at the early steps of modeling but become not significant at the final steps, e.g., Lines 373-376. The existence of such confusion appears to make the manuscript exceedingly and unnecessarily difficult to follow. | Thank you for your comment. The two sociodemographic variables that were significant predictors of purchase intentions for green tea are race/ethnicity and age (Lines 362-4). Therefore, they were added to Models 1 at Step 1 in which they were significant however they were non-significant in the full model (Lines 410-414; Table 6). Race/ethnicity and age were again entered as part of Step 1 in Model 2. In this model, we removed the dummy-coded QHCs to isolate the effects of evidence, risk reduction, and confidence. So Steps 1-3 were again added to Model 2 to understand the effects of the dependent variables. In Model 2, the sociodemographic variables remained non-significant (Table 6). We understand your concerns with the summary paragraph and have adjusted the language to increase its clarity. | Lines 386-95: “To summarize, the significant individual predictors for purchase intentions were entered into the models at step (1) and include: socio-demographics (race/ethnicity, age); consumer-specific variables (dietary supplement use, importance of health claims on food and supplement labels); and perceived susceptibility (general health, worry about health, worry about cancer, worry that led a dietary change). Model 1 significantly predicted purchase intentions and included steps (2) green tea consumption, (3) familiarity with green tea and cancer relationship, and (4) the seven QHCs, F(16, 400) = 7.841, p < .0001, adj. R2 = .208, R2 change = .028. Model 2 included steps (1-3), removed step 4 [i.e. QHCs from Model 1] and replaced it with (4) evidence perceptions and (5) confidence in the green tea-cancer relationship, which led to a statistically significant increase in R2 of .185, F(13, 401) = 20.225, p < .0001, adj. R2 = .376.” | ||
1 | what is the “N”? (1) If the total sample (1,335) was split into two product groups (green tea 666 and yukichi fruit juice 669) and each study participant saw only one product, then the “green tea” sample could not have the sample size as stated in the table. (2) The source of this footnote must be identified and referenced: “*As deemed by the US Food and Drug Administration.” | Thank you. (1) This is an error. Table 1 includes the entire sample (N=1335) however that is not clear. We have added this to the table title. (2) Removed | (1) Title: Table 1. Seven qualified health claims petitioned, unlawfully used by manufacturers, or prescribed by the US Food and Drug Administration, 2004-2012 (N=1,335). (2) | ||
45 | the correct claim language ends with “in later life,” not “later in life.” | Thank you. We’ve made this change. | Lines 44-5: Adequate calcium throughout life, as part of a well-balanced diet, may reduce the risk of osteoporosis in later life. | ||
61 | it does not appear that Ref 11 and 12 investigated any “A level” claims. | References 11 and 12 include health claims but not necessarily A claims. We changed the language in the manuscript to be more accurate. Thank you. | Lines 60-2: Consumers also indicate a willingness to pay 50% to 200% more for products making health claims than for comparable products [11], including yogurt [12]. | ||
91 | Who “rejected” the claim(s) must be identified. | Good point, thanks. We indicated who or what entity rejected the claim. | Lines 91-4: However, Fleminger’s claims were rejected by the FDA since they are scientifically inaccurate. While the three additional QHCs were written by the FDA (Table 1, 2005p; 2005b; 2011) and are scientifically accurate [23], the courts found them too technical (Table 1, 2005p; 2005b; 2011). | ||
2 | are the labels for the two “familiarity” variables misplaced? | Correct! Thank you. | See Table 2 for language switched between Familiarity variables. | ||
All | the term “functional food” is often used and there appears to be a presumption that both studied products are functional food. Yet, the term is never defined and there is no discussion of why either product is considered a functional food. | Thank you. We have added a definition of functional food to the manuscript to clarify the term. | Lines 113-5: Functional foods are “foods or dietary components that may provide a health benefit beyond basic nutrition and may play a role in reducing or minimizing the risk of certain diseases and other health conditions” (AND, Position paper 2013). | ||
200 | are these “dependent” measures not “independent” measures? | Thank you for your thoughtful inquiry. The measures outlined in top portion of Table 2 are dependent since the responses may change as a result of exposure to a QHC. The independent measures are those factors that will not change as a result of the QHC. The Wills et al. (2012) review and conceptual framework guided this study which identified several variables in the same manner. | |||
224 | where does the 9.3% come from? What is the denominator? | Thank you. The sample was divided into two conditions. Of the participants in the green tea condition who drank green tea, they indicated why they chose to do so. The denominator is smaller. We have added language to the manuscript to clarify this result. | Lines 233-4: Of the respondents who reportedly consumed green tea in the past year (n=345), fewer than 10% drank it to reduce their risk of cancer (n=32, 9.3%). | ||
51 | suggest adding one or two examples of a disclaimer. | Thank you. To maintain the length of the manuscript, we have added language to refer to Table 1 that includes this information. | Lines 53-4: For examples of disclaimers, please see the QHCs composed by the US FDA and the court in Table 1. The last sentence of these four QHCs are disclaimers. | ||
1 | suggest clarifying somewhere which claims are petitioned and unlawfully used. | Okay, thank you. | Please refer to Table 1, Status column for added language. | ||
103-4 | cannot find where this is discussed in the Results and/or Summary section: “We also clarify whether the current QHC, permitted by the FDA, increases consumer purchase intentions for green tea products in comparison with claims no longer in use.” | Thank you. We added some language to address this concern. | Lines 461-4: “The 2012 QHC also produced greater purchase intentions for green tea than the FDA QHCs but the results were not statistically significant, which suggests the current QHC may strike the balance between interests of making profit for companies and the interest of the FDA to prevent consumer confusion.” | ||
182 | Is a linear regression (assuming it means an ordinary least squares regression) the appropriate statistical model for dependent variables in this study? All dependent variables are on a discrete and ordered measure. Could alternative models such as an ordered logistic/probit model better match the dependent variables? | Thank you. It is possible that an ordered logistic/probit model could have examined this data. However, the authors agree that the results and interpretation would be far more complicated, particularly any interaction effects, and less appropriate for our target audience (nutrition professionals, regulators, the courts) who will have less experience with logistic regression/probit analyses than linear regression. | |||
207-11 | suggest adding information on the response rate or the cooperation rate, i.e., how many panelists were invited to participate? | Thank you. We have added the completion rate to the manuscript. | Lines 217-8: A total of 1,335 participants completed the online experiment, of the 2,219 sampled, for a 60% completion rate. | ||
4 | note that percentages are in parentheses. | Thank you. We added that information to the title of Table 4. | Please refer to the Title in Table 4. | ||
262;416 | explain what the “other factors” are or may be. | Thank you. We have added language to address your concern. | Lines 272-4: Irrespective of the QHC, participants reported greater evidence for the green tea-cancer relationship than for yukichi fruit juice and gastrocoridalis suggesting there are other factors, in addition to the measures in the current study, that contribute to their perceptions. | ||
281 | why is this finding “as expected”? | Thank you. We have removed this phrase from the manuscript. | |||
6 | what do * and ** denote? | Thank you. We have added appropriate footnotes to denote the two symbols. | Please refer to Table 6. | ||
428 | could an attempt be made to explain how the language of a claim could make a difference in purchase intent by speculating the focus of the various claims, i.e., how they describe the strength of the “evidence” and how their disclaim language differs? | Ok, thank you. | Lines 440-464: “Claim language is regarded as a predictor of purchase intentions for functional products with health claims [38] and our results support this theory. While the results of the current study cannot isolate the language or wording in QHCs that may have led to greater purchase intentions for green tea, the results show that QHCs written by Fleminger led to greater purchase intentions compared with other QHCs. However, the FDA concluded that the claims written by Fleminger overstate the level of scientific support for the green tea-cancer relationship [20,22]. Our results provide support for the agency’s conclusion, demonstrating that these same QHCs produced greater perceptions of evidence and greater intentions to purchase green tea, compared with the other claims. The 2004 Fleminger QHC indicates, “There is scientific evidence supporting this health claim although the evidence is not conclusive” while the 2008 and 2010 Fleminger claims suggest the evidence is “credible but limited,”. Further, the 2010 claim identifies the FDA as the reviewer of evidence which altogether, aimed to increase the trustworthiness of the claim. The 2005p and 2005b QHCs reference the number and quality of studies behind the claimed relationship which is similar to other diet-disease claims that the court found to be too technical for consumers to understand [21]. Although technically accurate, the claims are not consumer-friendly. Since QHCs were required by case law, it is possible that the agency sought to protect the consumer from being misled about the health value of a product by drafting overly technical claims [21-22]. The 2011 claim, which states that the FDA does not agree with the claimed relationship, provides insight into the agency’s perspective [22]. The 2012 FDA QHC suggested by the federal court as a compromise between companies’ abilities to market the health benefit of green tea and the FDA’s mission to prevent consumer confusion about scientific certainty for the relationship (Fleminger, Inc. v. US DHH, 2012) led to greater perceptions of evidence than the FDA QHCs in 2005p/b and 2011. The 2012 QHC also produced greater purchase intentions for green tea than the FDA QHCs but the results were not statistically significant, which suggests the current QHC may strike a balance between interests of making profit for companies and the interest of the FDA in preventing consumer confusion.” |
Reviewer 3 Report
The article presents a very important topic, which concerns the influence of the Qualified Health Claims on consumer purchase intentions. My evaluation of the paper is high, particularly in the case of methodology, which was described in an exhaustive way. The choice of green tea and the target group is proper and justified. The results are clearly described and wide discussion has been conducted. The structure of the paper is correct as well.
Nevertheless, I have some comments that the authors may take into consideration:
1. In my opinion, the article would have even more scientific soundness, if there were some references to the theory of consumption, particularly to the consumer behavior.
2. The contribution would gain in value, if the importance of results for the market would be wider described. I recommend to relate the study to market investigation or carry out more interdisciplinary research in future.
3. The abstract lacks the aim of the paper as well as research questions and/or hypotheses.
4. I think that the sentence “Perhaps participants in our study that take (….) drink green tea” (p. 15, l. 424-426) should not appear in the paper because the participants’ beliefs in this field were not investigated.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer 3, Thank you very much for your review. We have addressed the areas you identified and believe the paper has improved and certainly the abstract is better suited to describe the study. Thank you again.
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In my opinion, the article would have even more scientific soundness, if there were some references to the theory of consumption, particularly to the consumer behavior. | Thank you for your thoughtful comment. The Health Belief Model and the Health Claims Framework have both been used to predict consumption of health-related products, but we believe that our results are relevant to a number theories which seek to explain consumption behaviors, and we hope that researchers will use the findings of our study to further advance and refine these theories. Unfortunately, however, it isn’t possible to elaborate on these connections within the limited number of words allocated to submissions for this journal. | ||||
The contribution would gain in value, if the importance of results for the market would be wider described. I recommend to relate the study to market investigation or carry out more interdisciplinary research in future. | Thank you, we will further collaborate with researchers in other disciplines to expand the application of the results. We have reduced the length of this manuscript several times and so for this reason, we will seek collaboration in the future, as you suggested. As an aside, our group published a paper last year that described and characterized the older green tea consumer in the US which may be used as a consumer profile for QHCs. We have added language to suggest that this work be expanded to other disciplines. | Lines 484-7: “Future research could examine the complexities of QHCs through a more interdisciplinary lens. More specifically, collaborating with market researchers could expand the application of our results to general consumer behavior and consider its place within the theory of consumption.” | |||
The abstract lacks the aim of the paper as well as research questions and/or hypotheses. | Thank you for pointing this out. We have edited the abstract to include the aim and general RQs. | Abstract: Qualified Health Claims describe diet-disease relationships and summarize the quality and strength of evidence for a claim. Companies assert that QHCs increase sales and take legal action to ensure claims reflect their interests. Yet, there is no empirical evidence that QHCs influence consumers. Using green tea as a case study, this study investigates the effects of QHCs on purchase intentions among adults 55 years and older living in the US. An online survey using a between-subjects design examined QHCs about the relationship between green tea and the reduced risk of breast and/or prostate cancer or yukichi fruit juice and the reduced risk of gastrocoridalis, a fictitious relationship. QHCs written by a green tea company generated greater perceptions of evidence for the relationship, greater confidence in green tea and cancer and increased purchase intentions for green tea than other QHCs. Factors that mitigated the claim’s effects on purchase intentions are: race/ethnicity; age; importance of health claims; supplement use; health; worry about health/becoming sick with cancer; worry that led to dietary change; green tea consumption; and familiarity with the green tea-cancer. Consumers who made health-related dietary change in the past year and consider health claims important indicated greater purchase intentions than others. | |||
15 | 424-6 | I think that the sentence “Perhaps participants in our study that take (….) drink green tea” (p. 15, l. 424-426) should not appear in the paper because the participants’ beliefs in this field were not investigated. | Thank you for pointing this out. We have removed this sentence from the manuscript. |
Reviewer 4 Report
Qualified Health Claim Language affects Purchase Intentions for Green Tea Products in the United States
The manuscript addresses an interesting topic and fits the scope of the journal Nutrients. Overall I feel this manuscript is strong. The rationale is well articulated and the literature is presented clearly. The study is novel because it researches the effect of Qualified Health Claims on purchase intention. By examining the actual wording of health claims and showing its great impact on consumers, this study is beneficial for marketers and policy makers alike.
The manuscript would benefit from a few minor revisions listed below:
Page 2, Line 54: Incomplete sentence: “Consumer research about Qualified Health Claims.”
Page 6: Please explain why the scale of the variable “Familiarity – diet-disease relationship” is -1, 0, 3.
Page 7 and 8: It should be made clear that the variable “nutrition knowledge” (“knowledge about diet and health”) is subjective nutrition knowledge (or perceived nutrition knowledge like it was written in line 283) because it does not a measure actual knowledge but what the participant perceives to know. See Apendix B in Moorman, C., Diehl, K., Brinberg, D., & Kidwell, B. (2004). Subjective knowledge, search locations, and consumer choice. Journal of Consumer Research, 31(3), 673–680. https://doi.org/10.1086/425102.
The analysis (ind. variables explained almost 40%variance in purchase intentions) is convincing. Based on the good sampling and the shown analysis, the conclusions are justified.
Thank you.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer 4, Thank you very much for your review and attention to detail. I have addressed the issues you identified in the manuscript and believe they improve its quality considerably. Please see the table below for a detailed response to each concern you raised.
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2 | 54 | “Consumer research about Qualified Health Claims.” | Thank you for pointing this out. This is my error and is a subheading. We have changed the formatting. | Lines 54-5: 1.1. Consumer research about Qualified Health Claims. | |
6 | 2 | Please explain why the scale of the variable “Familiarity – diet-disease relationship” is -1, 0, 3. | Thank you, this is my error. There are two familiarity variables and the names were mistakenly swapped. We have changed the variable names to the correct scales. | Please see changes to the Familiarity variables in Table 2.
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7 | 283 | It should be made clear that the variable “nutrition knowledge” (“knowledge about diet and health”) is subjective nutrition knowledge (or perceived nutrition knowledge like it was written in line 283) because it does not a measure actual knowledge but what the participant perceives to know. See Apendix B in Moorman, C., Diehl, K., Brinberg, D., & Kidwell, B. (2004). Subjective knowledge, search locations, and consumer choice. Journal of Consumer Research, 31(3), 673–680. https://doi.org/10.1086/425102. | Thank you for noting this issue. We have changed the language in Table 2 and throughout the manuscript to address this issue. | Line 235: The majority of the participants believe they are informed about diet and health (i.e. perceived nutrition knowledge) (n=1,298, 97.2%) and consider health claims important on food and dietary supplement product labels (n=1,168, 88.0%; n=926, 91.5%, respectively). Lines 237-8: No differences were found between groups or conditions with respect to general health, perceived nutrition knowledge, green tea consumption in the past year, worry about cancer, or health-related dietary changes. Table 2.: Perceived Nutrition Knowledge | |
The analysis (ind. variables explained almost 40%variance in purchase intentions) is convincing. Based on the good sampling and the shown analysis, the conclusions are justified. | Thank you! |
Round 2
Reviewer 2 Report
Thanks to the authors for considering and incorporating many of my comments. Nevertheless, there remain several issues, some more significant than others, that warrant further consideration.
line 67: what are the "four" claims?
Table 1: suggest (1) removing any mention of the fictitious drink and diet-health relationship and (2) adjusting the N to the green tea sample only because none of the fictitious claims existed and could have been "petitioned, unlawfully used or prescribed."
Table 1: should add "scientifically accurate" to the three FDA claims.
Table 1: should substitute "allowable" for "allowed" at the Federal Court claim.
(Significant issue) lines 194-199: strongly suggest that the text clearly indicate the 13-point scale is developed for the purpose of the study but not a scale that FDA has used in its review of scientific evidence or a scale "consistent with" FDA's scoring scheme in any shape or form.
(Significant issue) Lines 229-230: strongly suggest a reconsideration of the logic behind this statement. this statement appears to mean that only when respondents scored an average of 8 or higher they perceived "greater levels of evidence than was denoted for green tea QHCs by the FDA." this, however, would preclude the possibility that an average of any number, perhaps except for 1 or 2, could have the same meaning. In addition, Murphy's ranking approach has not been reviewed and/or accepted by the FDA or any other researchers and should not be used to justify the scale designation here.
Line 297: 13-point?
(Significant issue) Line 298: the authors' response still has not provided any evidence or established appropriate rationale behind the assertion that "the results are CONSISTENT WITH FDA's evaluation of the scientific evidence."
(Significant issue) Choice of the reference claim: A key research objective is (Lines 140-141) - "whether the current QHC increases consumer purchase intentions for green tea products in comparison with claims no longer in use." Strongly suggest that the choice of the reference claim be made on this basis. Also, this choice would be much less vulnerable to the problem of selecting a QHC that covers only one but not both cancers. And the 2012 claim had about the same number of respondents as other claims.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer 2,
Thank you for your thoughtful review. We have responded to your concerns and have tabulated them below. Thank you again.
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67 | what are the "four" claims? | We were referencing the line before (“QHCs composed by the US FDA and the court in Table 1). We have clarified the language to address your concern. | Lines 66-7: “For examples of disclaimers, please see the QHCs composed by the US FDA and the court in Table 1. The disclaimer is the last sentence of the QHC.” | ||
1 | suggest (1) removing any mention of the fictitious drink and diet-health relationship and (2) adjusting the N to the green tea sample only because none of the fictitious claims existed and could have been "petitioned, unlawfully used or prescribed." | (1) We have removed mention of the fictitious condition in this table. (2) We respectfully disagree that we halve the n to reflect half of our study sample. The authors agree that there is value for readers to view the number of respondents randomly assigned to each QHC group, regardless of the condition. | Please refer to Table 1. | ||
1 | should add "scientifically accurate" to the three FDA claims. | Ok. | Please refer to Table 1 under column Status. | ||
1 | should substitute "allowable" for "allowed" at the Federal Court claim. | Ok. | Please refer to Table 1 under column Status. | ||
194-199 | strongly suggest that the text clearly indicate the 13-point scale is developed for the purpose of the study but not a scale that FDA has used in its review of scientific evidence or a scale "consistent with" FDA's scoring scheme in any shape or form. | Ok. We’ve added language to address your concern. We considered using the FDA QHC language to accurately reflect the level of evidence in the survey scale. However, the authors strongly agreed that respondents would likely match words found in the QHC to words found in the scale, which was not the aim of our study. | Lines 217-9: “The scale does not necessarily reflect FDA’s rating of evidence however it is based on the Murphy (2005) approach to develop a scale that may correspond to the levels of evidence [46].” | ||
229-230 | strongly suggest a reconsideration of the logic behind this statement. this statement appears to mean that only when respondents scored an average of 8 or higher they perceived "greater levels of evidence than was denoted for green tea QHCs by the FDA." this, however, would preclude the possibility that an average of any number, perhaps except for 1 or 2, could have the same meaning. In addition, Murphy's ranking approach has not been reviewed and/or accepted by the FDA or any other researchers and should not be used to justify the scale designation here. | Ok. We have removed the sentence to address your concern. | REMOVED: The logic followed that scores above the mid-point 7 would align with greater levels of evidence than was denoted for green tea QHCs by the FDA. | ||
297 | 13-point? | Ok. | Line 317: 13-point scale of evidence | ||
298 | the authors' response still has not provided any evidence or established appropriate rationale behind the assertion that "the results are CONSISTENT WITH FDA's evaluation of the scientific evidence." | Ok. We have edited the language to address your concern. | Lines 316-8: “Overall, participants rated the level of evidence as a “2” (i.e. D-grade) in both conditions (Table 3) and when the 13-point scale of evidence was collapsed into four grades of evidence, the results are consistent with a D level of evidence [54].” | ||
140-141 | Choice of the reference claim: A key research objective is (Lines 140-141) - "whether the current QHC increases consumer purchase intentions for green tea products in comparison with claims no longer in use." Strongly suggest that the choice of the reference claim be made on this basis. Also, this choice would be much less vulnerable to the problem of selecting a QHC that covers only one but not both cancers. And the 2012 claim had about the same number of respondents as other claims. | Thank you. The authors discussed the reference group extensively during data analysis and revisited the topic in response to your comment. We respectfully disagree. The QHC group variables were entered as a block so, no matter the reference, the result would be similar (Fields) meaning that consumers have greater intentions when viewing Fleminger QHCs. The ANOVA results under section 3.1. (Lines 262-4) also demonstrates: “There was also a significant main effect of QHC, such that claims written by Fleminger produced greater purchase intentions than claims written by the FDA, F(6, 1,299) = 8.047, p < .0001." |