The Pivotal Role of Presepsin in Assessing Sepsis-Induced Cholestasis

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report (Previous Reviewer 2)

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The manuscript is well written with clear figures and tables, the statistical analysis was approached excellently, satisfying all the results obtained.

Author Response

Reviewer 1

The manuscript is well written with clear figures and tables, the statistical analysis was approached excellently, satisfying all the results obtained.

Response: Thank you very much for your time and positive feedback on our submission.

Reviewer 2 Report (New Reviewer)

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Thank you for allowing me to read and review this excellent paper! It is scientifically sound, and I believe it will have good clinical impact if published.

Line 64: lateral decubitus is a position. Thus, please state “…. due to the lateral decubitus positioning of the patient.”

Why is the text from lines 73-84 in red colour?

The introduction is too lengthy. Probably some text here can be shifted to the discussion section.

Line 107: is there not supposed to be a comma between “increases” and “both” in the statement “As sepsis increases, both presepsin and cholestasis-related parameters, a positive correlation between presepsin level and biliary parameters is to be expected?”

Under section “Study design and ethical issues,” the authors mentioned that informed consent was obtained (line 128) when the study design was retrospective rather than prospective (line 125). Please confirm if this was indeed the case as some patients were even deceased (line 308).

Fig 1 does not have a footer explanation on the abbreviations used (e.g. NT-proBNP and conjbil)

Line 184: were cultures of respiratory specimens not looked at when diagnosing pulmonary infections?

Line 189: it is well-known that a positive urine culture does not necessary indicate a UTI. For instance, a sample which grew two or more different organisms is considered contaminated. Thus, please refine your UTI diagnosis criteria.

The discussion section was very well-written. In particular, the authors attempted to scientifically explain why presepsin was the variable most likely to be associated with cholestasis-related parameters and they have managed to defend their study decisions (such as not investigating correlations between cholestasis-related parameters and the SOFA score).

Author Response

Reviewer 2

Comments 1: Thank you for allowing me to read and review this excellent paper! It is scientifically sound, and I believe it will have good clinical impact if published.

Response 1: Thank you very much for your constructive feedback and positive assessment of our study. Please find below a detailed response to your comments. The changes made in the manuscript are highlighted in red.

Comments 2: Line 64: lateral decubitus is a position. Thus, please state “…. due to the lateral decubitus positioning of the patient.”

Response 2: The change was made as indicated.

Comments 3: Why is the text from lines 73-84 in red colour?

Response 3: This is a carryover from a previous revision; we have corrected it in the manuscript.

Comments 4: The introduction is too lengthy. Probably some text here can be shifted to the discussion section.

Response 4: A significant paragraph from the Introduction was moved to the Discussion section (highlighted in yellow), as suggested.

Comments 5: Line 107: is there not supposed to be a comma between “increases” and “both” in the statement “As sepsis increases, both presepsin and cholestasis-related parameters, a positive correlation between presepsin level and biliary parameters is to be expected?”

Response 5: Thank you for bringing this confusing phrasing to our attention. We have revised it to: “As both presepsin and cholestasis-related parameters increase during sepsis, a positive correlation between presepsin level and biliary parameters (ConjBil, GGT, and AlkPh) in septic patients is to be expected”

Comments 6: Under section “Study design and ethical issues,” the authors mentioned that informed consent was obtained (line 128) when the study design was retrospective rather than prospective (line 125). Please confirm if this was indeed the case as some patients were even deceased (line 308).

Response 6: We have included the following text in the “2.1. Study design and ethical issues” subsection: All patients admitted to our hospital are asked to sign an informed consent form, allowing the results from their clinical examination, laboratory tests, and imaging investigations to be used for research purposes. If patients are unable to sign due to cognitive impairment, impaired consciousness, or motor function limitations, a close relative is asked to sign on their behalf.

Comments 7: Fig 1 does not have a footer explanation on the abbreviations used (e.g. NT-proBNP and conjbil)

Response 7: The abbreviations used are now defined in the figure legend, as requested.

Comments 8: Line 184: were cultures of respiratory specimens not looked at when diagnosing pulmonary infections?

Response 8: As an answer to this pertinent question, we have inserted the following paragraph in the Methods section:

“By contrast to the UTI, we generally did not rely on microbiologic tests in the diagnosis of respiratory infection as these have variable sensitivity and specificity and do not influence significantly the therapeutic approach to the patient, at least in the initial phases. Moreover, administrative constraints do not allow obtaining sputum samples in our emergency department (although obtaining urine samples for culture is possible and commonly performed). Nonetheless, the antibiotic is started as soon as a pulmonary infection is suspected (based on clinical, imaging, and laboratory data) as the cause of the septic condition, frequently in the emergency department a few hours after admission. Sputum samples are obtained only the next day when the patient is already under antibiotic treatment – as a result, sputum cultures are usually negative. Sputum cultures are however routinely obtained from patients admitted to the intensive care unit and they are primarily used to guide antibiotic treatment. Other clinicians appear to have a similar approach to the diagnosis and management of respiratory infections.”

Comments 9: Line 189: it is well-known that a positive urine culture does not necessary indicate a UTI. For instance, a sample which grew two or more different organisms is considered contaminated. Thus, please refine your UTI diagnosis criteria.

Response 9: We fully agree with this pertinent observation and have made the following changes to the text: “UTI were diagnosed in patients with a urine culture (obtained from clean-catch urine samples) positive for a single organism, with bacterial growth greater than 100,000 CFUs/mL, accompanied by increased urine leukocyte count and/or positive urine leukocyte esterase test, along with biological markers of inflammation/infection (leukocytosis, increased inflammatory markers, elevated procalcitonin or presepsin). In none of our patients were the urine samples obtained by invasive methods, therefore a bacterial growth of less than 100,000 CFUs/mL was not considered indicative of UTI. The growth of multiple organisms was attributed to contamination and consequently did not qualify as evidence of UTI.”

Comments 10: The discussion section was very well-written. In particular, the authors attempted to scientifically explain why presepsin was the variable most likely to be associated with cholestasis-related parameters and they have managed to defend their study decisions (such as not investigating correlations between cholestasis-related parameters and the SOFA score).

Response 10: Thank you for your appreciation!

This manuscript is a resubmission of an earlier submission. The following is a list of the peer review reports and author responses from that submission.

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors This retrospective clinical study was conducted on 544 patients and it isn’t well-designed. The limitation of this study is the small number of patients and a single-center retrospective research. Additionally, most of the sources cited as references are old (20-25 years old). Presepsin is not a current marker. In addition, I have stated some of my specific comments below.
1) The role of Presepsin in sepsis-induced cholestasis is emphasized in this manuscript. 2)The article does not address a specific gap in the field. 3) The content of the article does not contribute to the literature compared to other previously written articles. 4) It is not enough to interpret Sepsis with Presepsin alone. Therefore, a study with another biomarker with proven effectiveness (e.g. Procalcitonin) should be performed together with presepsin. 5) References are not appropriate. The number of current references is quite small. 6) The number of paintings is large and their quality is low. The number of tables needs to be reduced. 7) Again, although the 48th and 49th sources are shown as references in the discussion section, the number of sources in the reference section is 45. There is an inconsistency. 8) This study should be planned prospectively and other current markers should be used in addition to Presepsin. Therefore, more comprehensive and multicenter studies are needed for generalization.
In conclusion, this study does not add any new information to the current literature. This manuscript is not acceptable in its current form.

 

Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The authors evaluate a possible pivotal role of Presepsin in Assessing Sepsis-Induced Cholestasis. In a sepsis setting, the increase in cholestasis related parameters is associated with presepsin with a higher probability than hemodynamic, inflammatory, or coagulation-related variables. These results can be useful for limiting imaging investigations in emergency patients and focusing the clinician on prioritizing primary infection treatment.

The manuscript is well written with clear figures and tables, the statistical analysis was approached excellently, satisfying all the results obtained.

The manuscript can be accepted in the current form.