Infective Endocarditis—Characteristics and Prognosis According to the Affected Valves
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for Authors1. You claim that there are no studies comparing all types of valve involvement in IE. Here are some, just some, there are more in the literature, you just have to focus beyond the abstracts: Netzer et al-Heart 2002, Pereira Nunes et al-IJID 2018, Moreira et al-Rev Port Cardiol 2018, Leroy et al-Ann Intensive Care 2015. There are more.
2. How many cases were ultrasonographically negative? I deduce that it was 1, since your distribution in valves adds to 269 instead of 270? Or should it be 268 since you have 2/270 cases of CDRIE? What kind of devices were implicated in these two cases?
3. Proclaiming that Canada, India and Iran have a lot of iv drug abusers, based on isolated studies from these countries that may focus on a limited number of patients or geographic region is improper, to say the least. If I was a Canadian or an Indian or an Iranian I would be insulted. Do you have data that show that iv drug addiction is widespread, as you state, in these countries?
Author Response
Dear Reviewer,
Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. Thank you for the constructive review, the referee’s comments have improved our manuscript. Please find the detailed responses below and the corresponding revisions/corrections highlighted changes in the re-submitted files.
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Does the introduction provide sufficient background and include all relevant references?
Are all the cited references relevant to the research?
Is the research design appropriate?
Are the methods adequately described?
Are the results clearly presented?
Are the conclusions supported by the results? |
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1. You claim that there are no studies comparing all types of valve involvement in IE. Here are some, just some, there are more in the literature, you just have to focus beyond the abstracts: Netzer et al-Heart 2002, Pereira Nunes et al-IJID 2018, Moreira et al-Rev Port Cardiol 2018, Leroy et al-Ann Intensive Care 2015. There are more |
1.We agree and have rewritten and expanded this section to clarify our statements based on previous studies. |
Introduction |
2. How many cases were ultrasonographically negative? I deduce that it was 1, since your distribution in valves adds to 269 instead of 270? Or should it be 268 since you have 2/270 cases of CDRIE? What kind of devices were implicated in these two cases? |
2.Thank you for paying attention. This is a technical error - the total single valve cases is 223 (82.6%), double valves are 45 (16.66%) and 2 (0.74%) CDRIE cases. The total valves distribution is 268. CDRIE are both permanent VVI pacemaker. |
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3. Proclaiming that Canada, India and Iran have a lot of iv drug abusers, based on isolated studies from these countries that may focus on a limited number of patients or geographic region is improper, to say the least. If I was a Canadian or an Indian or an Iranian I would be insulted. Do you have data that show that iv drug addiction is widespread, as you state, in these countries? |
3. We accept your remark as valid. We have rewritten the comment about tricuspid valve involvement. |
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Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThank you for inviting me to review this manuscript. It is interesting and informative. I have some comments that could be of use:
1. Line 27: It is not clear what the numbers in the parentheses are
2. Line 29: All gender and species names should be in italics throughout the manuscript
3. Line 48: A dot is missing
4. The aim of the present study should be more clearly stated at the end of the introduction section
5. The authors mention that there are no studies comparing multivalvular with no multivalvular endocarditis. That is not correct. There are studies such as doi: 10.3390/jcm11164736 or 10.1016/j.cjca.2020.03.046. These studies should be mentioned in the introduction section
6. This manuscript has too many sections. The structure should be: introduction, methods, results, and discussion
7. The authors say that this is a cross-sectional study. Isn’t this a retrospective study?
8. Table 1: the table should have an explanation for all abbreviations used in the footnote
9. Table 3: The percentages of CoNS and aureus do not always add up to the percentage mentioned in all staphylococci. Especially in AV. Why is that?
10. This study lacks a limitations subsection. It has several drawbacks, such as its obvious retrospective nature, the fact that it has data from only one center, limiting the generalization of the results, etc. This should be mentioned at the end of the discussion section before the conclusions
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageMinor
Author Response
Dear Reviewer,
Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. Thank you for the constructive review, the referee’s comments have improved our manuscript. Please find the detailed responses below and the corresponding revisions/corrections highlighted changes in the re-submitted files.
Questions for General
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Reviewer’s Evaluation |
Response and Revisions
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Does the introduction provide sufficient background and include all relevant references?
Are all the cited references relevant to the research?
Is the research design appropriate?
Are the methods adequately described?
Are the results clearly presented?
Are the conclusions supported by the results? |
Must be improved
Can be improved
Can be improved
Can be improved
Must be improved
Can be improved
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Has been improved
Has been improved
Has been improved
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Comments
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1. Line 27: It is not clear what the numbers in the parentheses are
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The Charlson comorbidity index is present as a median (IQR). We changed than with vs |
Line 27 |
2. Line 29: All gender and species names should be in italics throughout the manuscript
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Yes, Thank you! I made them in italics. |
Line 24,29,30,31,34 |
3. Line 48: A dot is missing
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We added it. |
Line 48 |
4. The aim of the present study should be more clearly stated at the end of the introduction section
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Thank you! We made the change throughout the manuscript. |
Introduction |
5. The authors mention that there are no studies comparing multivalvular with no multivalvular endocarditis. That is not correct. There are studies such as doi: 10.3390/jcm11164736 or 10.1016/j.cjca.2020.03.046. These studies should be mentioned in the introduction section
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We appreciate your comment. We have rewritten the introduction and included these studies. |
Introduction |
6. This manuscript has too many sections. The structure should be introduction, methods, results, and discussion
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We agree with this comment and have restructured the manuscript. |
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7. The authors say that this is a cross-sectional study. Isn’t this a retrospective study?
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You have the right; it is our mistake. We deleted cross-sectional. |
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8. Table 1: the table should have an explanation for all abbreviations used in the footnote
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Yes, thank you! It is our laps. We have written them. |
Table 1, footnote Line 98-101 |
9. Table 3: The percentages of CoNS and aureus do not always add up to the percentage mentioned in all staphylococci. Especially in AV. Why is that?
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Thank you for paying attention. This is a technical error – the number of patients is correct, but the percentage of Staphylococcus aureus – 9.9% is not correct . The right percent is 11.6%. We have changed it. |
Table 3. |
10. This study lacks a limitations subsection. It has several drawbacks, such as its obvious retrospective nature, the fact that it has data from only one center, limiting the generalization of the results, etc. This should be mentioned at the end of the discussion section before the conclusions
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We agree, thank you! We added this section. |
Section Limitations |
Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsSatisfied by the responses
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe manuscript has been improved during the revisions
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageMinor