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Delving into Hearing Threshold of the Delay Gap of Initial Reflection in a Room by Using the Response of Cortical Brainwaves

Appl. Sci. 2023, 13(21), 11856; https://doi.org/10.3390/app132111856
by Chiung-Yao Chen
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Appl. Sci. 2023, 13(21), 11856; https://doi.org/10.3390/app132111856
Submission received: 31 August 2023 / Revised: 22 September 2023 / Accepted: 26 September 2023 / Published: 30 October 2023
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Auditory Training)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

This paper concerns the variation range of acoustic parameters measured in a room using the response of brain waves. 

 

This paper could be interesting for acoustic designers and engineers. The study seems scientifically sound; however, some points must be attended to before publication.

 

- In the Abstract section, it is not recommended to present results. This section must contain the purpose and a brief description of the work; avoid the numerical results.

- Why trumpet and cello are chosen as audio sources?

- Are 17 subjects enough for the statistical significance of the study? 

- It is necessary to improve the quality of figures 2, 7, 8, and 9.

- Figure 5 is incomplete, as the X-axis is unlabeled. 

- The equations presentation is inconsistent (Eq 1 vs Eqs 2,3)

 

Author Response

1. Summary

Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. Please find the detailed responses below and the corresponding revisions/corrections in track changes in the re-submitted files.

 

 

2. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Comments 1: - In the Abstract section, it is not recommended to present results. This section must contain the purpose and a brief description of the work; avoid the numerical results.

Response 1:  The numerical results have been removed from the abstract section.

Thank you for pointing this out. I agree with this comment. Therefore, I have corrected in the re-submitted file.

Comments 2: - Why trumpet and cello are chosen as audio sources?

Response 2:  The reason of choosing trumpet and cello was added in Line 176-191.

Comments 3: - Are 17 subjects enough for the statistical significance of the study?

Response 3:   The amounts of subjects in JND experiments was added in Line 222-229.

Comments 4: - It is necessary to improve the quality of figures 2, 7, 8, and 9.

Response 4:   Figures 2, 7, 8, and 9 have been improved in the re-submitted file, but the figure number have been changed to be 4, 9, 10 and 12.

Comments 5: - Figure 5 is incomplete, as the X-axis is unlabeled.

Response 5:   Figure 5 has been corrected, but the figure number have been changed to be 4.

Comments 6: - The equations presentation is inconsistent (Eq 1 vs Eqs 2,3)

Response 6:   The equations presentation has been corrected in the re-submitted file.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

Manuscript shows the Delving into hearing threshold of the delay gap of initial reflection in a room by using the response of cortical brain waves with two different instruments. I have some considerations for you.

Introduction

As a suggestion I believe that the first paragraph should be placed at the end of the introduction. In my opinion at the beginning a background should be explained and after that the questions without answer.

The EEG items: N1, N2, must be explained. How these authors assessed this measurements? Are the sample of these studies musicians? Elderly? Young? Child? Could age influence this responses?

Methods

Why did you choose these instruments instead others or a song or a speech?

How did you select the sample? Which are the inclusion and exclusion criteria?

Line 170-181: are results.

Line 203-207 are results too.

The figures and tables (and their explanations) should be placed at results section, they are not methodology.

Line 198: “17 subjects” and line 302 “12 participants” which is correct?

Who collect the data, when, how (one, twice...)? how was the participant: sitting, blinded, light on/off (for example)? Please explain the procedure.

Methodology sections and results section are mixed. Bot should be rewritten.

Discussion is appropriate.

Author Response

1. Summary

 

 

Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. Please find the detailed responses below and the corresponding revisions/corrections in track changes in the re-submitted files.

 

 

2. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors

 

Comments 1:  Introduction

As a suggestion I believe that the first paragraph should be placed at the end of the introduction. In my opinion at the beginning a background should be explained and after that the questions without answer.

 

Response 1: Thank you for pointing this out. I agree with this comment. Therefore, I have corrected in the re-submitted file. The mistakes at the beginning of introduction has been corrected in Line 28-46.

 

Comments 2:  The EEG items: N1, N2, must be explained. How these authors assessed this measurements? Are the sample of these studies musicians? Elderly? Young? Child? Could age influence this responses?

 

Response 2:   The symbol of EEG items were interpret in Line 69-70, and Figure 1.

 

Comments 3:  Methods

Why did you choose these instruments instead others or a song or a speech?

 

Response 3:   To choose the musical instruments as the sound source because of integrating the relationship between subjective evaluation in a concert hall and brain waves.

 

Comments 4:  How did you select the sample? Which are the inclusion and exclusion criteria?

 

Response 4:    In the continuous JND experiments, 5 subjects obviously stopped to give responses to continuous cueing of ITDG variation in the middle of experiments, or successively responding to the operating staff after every stimulus, which data were excluded from the calculation of JND. Nevertheless, the data of brainwaves of all participants were inclusive since their psychological results were accepted.

 

Comments 5:  Line 170-181: are results. Line 203-207 are results too.

The figures and tables (and their explanations) should be placed at results section, they are not methodology.

 

Response 5:    The results of two experiments have been moved to the correct paragraph.

 

Comments 6:  Line 198: “17 subjects” and line 302 “12 participants” which is correct?

 

Response 6:    The subjective running IDTG experiments had 17 subjects’ data were accepted in the first stage in this study. However, the CBW recordings in the second stage were collected by 12 participants, since around 10 individual samples were suitable to link subjective evaluation in a concert hall in our serial experience.

 

Comments 7:  Who collect the data, when, how (one, twice...)? how was the participant: sitting, blinded, lights on/off (for example)? Please explain the procedure.

 

Response 7:    The supplements were located in Line 310-314, and the participants requirements were interpreted in Line 222-229.

 

Comments 8:  Methodology sections and results section are mixed. Bot should be rewritten.

 

Response 8:  The results of two experiments have been moved to the correct paragraph.

 

Comments 9:  Discussion is appropriate.

 

Response 9:  Thank you very much for taking the time to review this manuscript. But I have updated the coordinative range and confirmed it in a new Figure 11.

 

       

 

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Dear Authors, 

Thank you very much to consider my suggestions. Manuscript looks better.

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