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Entropy and the Idea of God(s): A Philosophical Approach to Religion as a Complex Adaptive System

Religions 2024, 15(8), 925; https://doi.org/10.3390/rel15080925 (registering DOI)
by Matthew Zaro Fisher
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Religions 2024, 15(8), 925; https://doi.org/10.3390/rel15080925 (registering DOI)
Submission received: 1 July 2024 / Revised: 26 July 2024 / Accepted: 27 July 2024 / Published: 30 July 2024
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Religion and/of the Future)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

This is a paper that connects religions to systems theory, a topic that is cutting edge in the natural sciences and in information science these days. The paper has a good bibliography of relevant literature. The paper uses a lot of jargon that will keep a wide readership away, but it is usually clear and accurate. I have several conceptual problems with individual passages (listed below), but I recommend publication after revision.

First, I was bothered by several conceptual issues in the abstract.

1.       The paper’s central idea, that religion is a complex adaptive system, is not even mentioned in the abstract.

2.       The opening sentence of the paper says that “a universal definition of religion eludes the field of religious studies.” That is true. But then the paper says that “it certainty seems on the surface that people are becoming differently religious rather than a-religious.” Soon after, the paper says that “religion will likely never disappear.” But one can make statements like these only after one has defined what is meant by “religion.” (Compare this sentence: “though I do not have a definition of ‘mercantile,’ it certainly seems on the surface that people are becoming differently mercantile rather than non-mercantile.”)  The paper also does not specify a time or location, and so the statements come off as airy. Are people becoming differently religious “since the Renaissance”? “Since the 1960s”? “Everywhere on earth”?

3.       A couple sentences later, the paper claims that “Religion is the fundamental means through which individuals-in-community mitigate increases in informational, statical, and thermodynamic articulations of entropy that relate to existential concerns in human experience: the passage of time, the need for belonging, and a sense of self and identity.” This sounds like precisely a universal definition of religion which the opening sentence had said was unavailable. At a minimum, this statement is, like the two sentences described in #1, above, only true when once has a definition.

4.       The paper declares that “people appear forever in search of the ‘anentropic.’” What is meant here by “forever”? Keeping oneself healthy, starting a family, getting an education, voting for a president… all of these activities could be interpreted as anentropic. But other what about sharing a meme, parachuting for fun, or committing suicide? Destructive pursuits do not seem anentropic. But perhaps this is not what the author meant by “forever.”

Here are spots in the paper itself where I thought that the way the paper phrased its points was misleading.

5.       The paper says, “My effort here is to begin to apply systems theory to philosophy of religion…” (90-1). If one is a philosopher and one applies systems theory to religion, one has not applied it to philosophy of religion.

6.       The offers “a philosophical approach to defining religion” (211-2). Perhaps this sentence only bothered me because of the opening sentence of the paper’s abstract said that there was no definition of religion. But perhaps “defining” here does not mean giving a defintion for a term but instead “explaining” and “specifying the function of”?

7.       The paper states that “Entropy is not a cause here, but rather a property, a measurement of a system state” (240-1). However, some properties are causal properties, and so the distinction was not clear to me. In addition, “a measurement of a system state” seems to be an appositive for the term “property,” but those terms do not seem equivalent. Is the red property of an apple “a measurement of the apple’s system state”?

8.       The paper states, “Masson’s work in applying cognitive linguistics to theological language shows how the processes of tectonic equivalence and double-scope blending reduce epistemic uncertainty” (lines 400-1). The terms “tectonic equivalence” and “double-scope blending” are not explained and are not mentioned previously or again. This is one of several examples of the jargon that I mentioned above. 

9.       The “need” in the statement that “we need to distinguish religious meaning from other forms of meaning to identify what is religious about communication…” (lines 487-8) sounds like an empty tautology to me. (In fact, I had this thought often when the paper claimed that something was “necessary.”)

10.   The paper says that the idea of God or gods “must be unconditioned” (line 505). I did not follow this argument, given that many gods are understood to exist in a conditioned way: they are said to have parents, and they have their own particular concerns, distractions, and fears. Sometimes, gods are even killed. Similarly, many spirits are not understood apophatically (line 521). This paragraph felt me as if a western-trained philosopher was trying to shoehorn cultural diversity into their preferred account.  

11.   I don’t follow what this is saying: “Conceptually, the anentropic is non-essential, and necessarily so” (lines 596-7).

12.   Does the phrase “cogitating of belief” (line 597-8) mean: believing? Or is the paper shifting to a focus on thinking about the process believing?

13.   The author might want to consider a recent book on exactly the topic of this paper: Andrei-Razvan Coltea, Complexifying Religion (Springer, 2023).

 

Typos:

1.      The term “compliments” (line 78) should be: complements.

2.      The term “hyper agency detection” (line 120) should be: hyperactive agency detection.

3.      The paper is missing commas ate several places, including here: “biting too hard for example” (line 143).

4.      It was not clear whether the phrases “such agents” and “the agents” (lines 179-80) refer to the ritual participants, or to the appeasement of supernatural agents.

5.      The paper cites a paper by Cho and Squier 2022 (line 215) but there is no such paper in the Works Cited.

6.      The paper uses brackets in this sentence: “In short, [western] science emerged from religion…” (lines 367-8). Brackets are used to add terms to direct quotes. Since this is not a quote, the author can use parentheses (or omit the punctuation altogether).

7.      The terms “distinction” and “act of distinction” (lines 70, 391) might be clearer as: the act of distinguishing.

8.      The term “telodynamic” (lines 432, 454, 547, 603, and 648) should be: teleodynamic.

9.      The phrase “both to preserve the system of dynastic state power, but it also afforded…” (lines 572-3) should be: both to preserve the system of dynastic state power, and to afford…

10.  I think that “ai” (line 586) should be capitalized.

Author Response

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this manuscript and provide detailed feedback, and I appreciate you taking the time to point out the typos I missed. I also appreciate you pointing out Coltea’s Complexifying Religion, which was incredibly helpful for shoring up the empirical data I’m drawing upon from systems theory to make the argument. It seems as Coltea and I have reached similar insights from two different starting points, sociology and philosophy, respectively. While Coltea’s analysis did not present any challenges to my core argument, I have since revised the argument light of reading his study so that it my philosophical approach employs a portion of his contribution (e.g. Distinguishing the signal vs noise in information perceived by psychic systems; allopoiesis and its relationship to autopoiesis, etc.), and to show a historical progression in systems theory of religion from Luhmann, to Pace, to Purzycki and Sosis, to Coltea, with my efforts attempting a synthesis to more completely explain the way psychic-social system communication leads to religious systems as complex and adaptive. I believe these better addresses the first three “can be improved” marks, providing better context in relation to previous theory, methods and approaches, and bolstering the argument. Pertaining to the last point, and concerning the feedback you provided, I read your feed back as understanding my argument to be proposing a more essentialist, and perhaps rationalist (e.g. need; necessary) position than I intended. While I don’t get into the epistemological weeds of constructive empiricism – I’ll save that for a later paper – I am intending to propose a nominalist, rather than realist understanding of both religion, and the significance of meaning as adaptive. While I do employ the language of the “anentropic” to signal to the individual a dimension of experience that is somehow unconstrained by the second law, this is discerned in and through one’s intuition exercising a selection dynamic on information, with the “survival” of the intuition in sustained communication resulting in the emergence and stability of a religious system over time. So, I’ve changed most references to the antropic to function more as an adjective, “intuition of the anentropic dimension of meaning,” rather than as a noun, “intuition of the anentropic” to hopefully avoid what I read as an essentialist interpretation of the argument. Now, it is possible I misunderstood your position, and so if issues around “necessary” remain, please do clarify so I can address it.

 

REVISIONS TO ABSRACT

The first four comments/suggestions you provided applied to conceptual issues in the abstract, which I have substantially revised to address these isues: I have modified the abstract to reflect the language of complex adaptive systems, contextualized the observation about “becoming differently religious” to the latter half of the twentieth century, better situated the analysis in relation to the persistence of religion as a CAS explanation rather than a definition (to your point in preferring “explanation,” I agree that the use of “definition” is perhaps too rigid for what I am trying to accomplish in providing a “baseline” narrative for explaining religion, in which other definitions may apply in a system of explanation), and I removed the “forever in search for” language to reduce the perceptions of necessity or western bias.

 

Revised Abstract:

While a universal definition of religion eludes the field of religious studies, it certainty seems that people are becoming differently religious rather than a-religious, especially since least since the latter half of the twentieth century. To explain the enduring relevance of religion in human experience, this article expands on recent evolutionary and sociological research in systems theory of religion and develops a philosophical approach to understanding religion as a complex adaptive system. Frameworks of meaning and beliefs communicated by religious systems emerge and adapt in relation to interpretive selection pressures communicated by individuals-in-community relative to entropy’s role in one’s contingent experience as a “teleodynamic self” in the arrow of time. Religious systems serve an entropy-reducing function in the minds of individuals, philosophically speaking, because their sign and symbol systems communicate an “anentropic” dimension to meaning that prevents uncertainty ad infinitum (e.g. maximum Shannon entropy) concerning matters of existential concern for phenomenological systems, i.e. persons. Religious systems will continue to evolve, and new religious movements will spontaneously emerge, as individuals find new ways to communicate their intuition of this anentropic dimension of meaning in relation to their experience of contingency in the arrow of time.

 

REVISIONS TO THE BODY OF THE PAPER:

 

Comment 5. The paper says, “My effort here is to begin to apply systems theory to philosophy of religion…” (90-1). If one is a philosopher and one applies systems theory to religion, one has not applied it to philosophy of religion.

 

EDIT: I can see how this causes confusion, so I changed it to (line 198-200):

 

·      My effort here is to begin to apply systems theory philosophically to better understand those “internal forces” hinted at by Pace that drive religious communication (2011, 226).

 

Eventually, I think systems theory can help refine philosophy of religion in a way that avoids the Eurocentric and Abrahamic-tradition focus of its analysis of religious phenomena, such as the idea of God as omniscient, omnipotent, etc., and I hint at what I mean by this when I say in 610-14 that concepts like omniscience and omnipotence are adaptive insights, rather than necessary qualities of that to which the anentropic dimension of meaning ultimately refers. However, to really make my point about “applying systems theory to philosophy of religion,” would require a wider analysis of evolutionary epistemology and constructive empiricism than I present here, and so I’ll save that for a later article.

 

Comment 6.       The offers “a philosophical approach to defining religion” (211-2). Perhaps this sentence only bothered me because of the opening sentence of the paper’s abstract said that there was no definition of religion. But perhaps “defining” here does not mean giving a defintion for a term but instead “explaining” and “specifying the function of”?

 

EDIT: changed to “explaining” (line 212-3). I agree that a “definition” fixes the phenomenon, where an “explanation” may be perceived as more mailable to a reader, and reflects the more nominalist, revisability inherent in a systems theory approach to explaining psycho-social phenomena.

 

Comment 7.       The paper states that “Entropy is not a cause here, but rather a property, a measurement of a system state” (240-1). However, some properties are causal properties, and so the distinction was not clear to me. In addition, “a measurement of a system state” seems to be an appositive for the term “property,” but those terms do not seem equivalent. Is the red property of an apple “a measurement of the apple’s system state”?

 

EDIT: Deleted. This sentence stemmed from my efforts to ensure I demonstrate an accurate understanding of entropy and systems science, even though I am trained in the humanities. Since this causes confusion, and since much of the “defending” of the role of information entropy in religion I thought I’d have to do is accomplished by Coltea’s study, I’ve just omitted it so I don’t unnecessarily open myself up to a criticism of misunderstanding.   

That being said: from what I understand, entropy is not a cause, but energy and information, with increases and decreases of entropy being a post-hoc description of the relationship between the two in a given system, i.e. a measurement of the energy-information relationship at Time 1 vs at Time 2, by some sort of observation distinguishing system from environment. However, to your question about the redness of the apple, I tend to agree with the epistemology of constructive empiricism of Bas van Fraassen, so I would say that the “property” of the redness of the apple is discerned emergently, as produced from the dynamic of the observation of the human eye relative to light hitting an object. After all, What does the redness look like to a bat who uses echolocation instead of sight? Or where is our awareness of the property during eight hours of dreamless sleep, where memory cannot even recall a mental representation? Again, I locate myself on the empiricist/nominalist camp rather than the rationalist camp, so I am perfectly happy to understand “redness” as a linguistic construct that stabilizes over time, and is predicated to instances where experience similarly conforms, rather than as a noumenal property inherent in the thing. So, when I get to the relationship between “phenomenological system” and “person,” the former should be understood as an empirical tautology, given the way experience presents itself according to a manifold proceeding according to the arrow of time, and the latter is the assertion that given makes of itself, asserting the significance of its self-referential autopoiesis as “I,” constructed in and through a relationship with a “we.”  

 

 

Comment 8.     The paper states, “Masson’s work in applying cognitive linguistics to theological language shows how the processes of tectonic equivalence and double-scope blending reduce epistemic uncertainty” (lines 400-1). The terms “tectonic equivalence” and “double-scope blending” are not explained and are not mentioned previously or again. This is one of several examples of the jargon that I mentioned above. 

 

EDIT: I changed these two technical terms to the more general “metaphor and symbolism,” of which they are both a species, for easier understanding and to avoid more instances of a jargon-heavy paper.

 

·      Masson’s work in applying cognitive linguistics to theological language shows how the use of metaphor- and symbol-building processes in our cognition reduce epistemic uncertainty by producing “new, often unanticipated, meanings” to make sense of two or more often conflicting inputs (2014, 102).

 

Comment 9.       The “need” in the statement that “we need to distinguish religious meaning from other forms of meaning to identify what is religious about communication…” (lines 487-8) sounds like an empty tautology to me. (In fact, I had this thought often when the paper claimed that something was “necessary.”)

 

EDIT: In addition to reducing language indicating necessity as I mentioned in the introduction above, I changed this sentence to avoid the tautology, hopefully. Coltea’s study helped me clarify what I mean by needing to distinguish religiously relevant information in communication vs religiously non-relevant information (Lines 578-595):

 

·      However, we need to distinguish that dimension to meaning that qualifies as “religious” in the social systems that allow them to operate as an “expert system,” speaking to the existential concerns of individuals-in-community relative to what we would describe as non-religious systems operating in society (see Pace 2011, 225). Otherwise, all communication would be considered religious, which would mean the concept is unhelpful for explaining what we mean by religion, and the phenomenon should instead be reduced to explanations offered by other disciplines like cognitive science, sociobiology, anthropology, or economics. Using Coltea’s insight that religion is a “complexity reducing technology” that sifts through the noise of information to isolate the signal of meaning in communication (2023, 13-14), we can say philosophically that the religious dimension of meaning in communication is perceived by the phenomenological system when it distinguishes the anentropic character of a signal indicating canonical information as distinct from the “noise” of entropically-applicable indexical information. By anentropic I mean “not subject to entropy,” rather than negentropic, or “entropy reducing.” Indeed, Coltea shows how meaningful information communicated by the religious system reduces entropy (uncertainty) and so contributes to the adaptive predictability of the psychic system, by why that information would be considered meaningful at the level of human experience requires a philosophical approach.

 

Comment 10.   The paper says that the idea of God or gods “must be unconditioned” (line 505). I did not follow this argument, given that many gods are understood to exist in a conditioned way: they are said to have parents, and they have their own particular concerns, distractions, and fears. Sometimes, gods are even killed. Similarly, many spirits are not understood apophatically (line 521). This paragraph felt me as if a western-trained philosopher was trying to shoehorn cultural diversity into their preferred account.  

 

EDIT: This is a fair criticism, and I anticipated your final sentence, but clearly I didn’t state my position clearly if it is coming off as claiming that the anentropic is the referent of belief must be described only in anentropic terms. I too would agree that would be starting with the axial-age, and particularly western, conceptions of ultimate reality, and would end up subordinating a localized indigenous tradition’s understanding of their Gods interacting with them to a what those God’s really are – references to a that which is ultimately anentropic. As I indicate, recognizing such anentropic descriptors may be the easiest way to recognize the presence of the anentropic dimension of meaning in human communication, but that is a secondary application of the concept than what I intend. I have revised the paragraph accordingly, and hopefully I better clarified my position to address the important concerns you raised (see lines 596-626):

 

·      What is perceived when communication is understood to contain “religious” meaning is the abstract representation of the interpenetrating dynamic of the allopoiesis of meaning constituting the community-of-individuals and the individual-in-community, depending on one’s starting point in communication (cf. Pace 2011, 221). The referent grounding this interpretation is intuited to be in some way unconditioned by the very conditions set on experience that drives the need to secure for experience such an unconditioned referent. Otherwise, there would be no meaning, but rather uncertainty “all the way down,” resulting in persistent anxiety. This is not to say that the theory requires the symbolism of a religious system delivered through the building blocks, such as supernatural agents, must exhibit only anentropic characteristics to be considered the building blocks of meaning. This would betray a western bias in religious thinking that understands divine agency to necessitate anentropic ontology, and therefore the existence of some sort of ultimate reality “beyond” the world in order to explain the existence of the world and the source of meaning. As we see in the various myths of oral and written traditions, however, the category of supernatural agents are often described as subject to the demands of the second law, and not always supernatural. Hence, the anentropic characteristics of omnipotence and omniscience, describing idea of God in western philosophy of religion, is itself a symbolic development in the evolutionary epistemology of phenomenological systems communicating their intuition of the anentropic over time in those geographic regions of the world we describe as “western.” What I mean by the intuition of the anentropic dimension of meaning is not the character of the referent itself – i.e. intuiting a being that is ”everlasting” as a necessary condition, but the way communication establishes a conceptual null-set in symbolic cognition which makes possible the interpretation of meaning that grounds our sense of self and social identity beyond the life-span of individual psychic systems interpreting this information. The intuition of the anentropic can be considered the perception of a signal that an individual interprets to be contained in communication, because it ultimately refers to the possibility of continued psycho-social autopoiesis in time (i.e. identity), despite the persistent experience of life in the arrow of time to the contrary. The autopoiesis of our self-reference or social reference is merely the analogical starting point from which this referent is apophatically inferred in the phenomenological encounter of self-referential constancy in arrow of time.

 

11. I don’t follow what this is saying: “Conceptually, the anentropic is non-essential, and necessarily so” (lines 596-7).

 

I clarified this point in relation to the second reviewers feedback who asked for a clarification on the predictive limits of the concept (Lines 645-661). What I mean by non-essential is that the anentropic isn’t what is believed in, but rather a descriptor for what beliefs functionally for society and substantively for the individual’s perception of meaning. I think the following clarifies it, but I may have misunderstood the confusion.

 

·      This affords us the opportunity to compare systems of belief without privileging a cultural conception of the anentropic dimension of meaning – e.g. as omnisicent, omnipotent, etc. – because the anentropic represents an epistemological move to explain why meaning is the output of religion as a complex adaptive system rather than a metaphysical claim that explains that for beliefs to be religious they must refer to the anentropic or negentropic character of “supernatural” agents – though that may be the easiest way to identify the intuition of the anentropic in some religious systems. As an epistemological claim, the intuition of the anentropic dimension of meaning helps distinguish the religious character of communication in general, but it cannot be elucidated beyond its sociological function without the ability to recognize the symbolic representation of that intuition in communication. Religions are adaptive semiotic systems, emergent from adaptive biological systems, and so an “inside-the faith” understanding is required to recognize the articulation of the anentropic dimension of meaning in a social system’s history of symbolic communication. In addition to insights gleaned from cybernetics, sociology, and evolutionary theory, the traditional tools of religious studies and the humanities, such as linguistic, textual, and cultural analysis will remain relevant for an interdisciplinary approach to systems theory of religion.

 

12.   Does the phrase “cogitating of belief” (line 597-8) mean: believing? Or is the paper shifting to a focus on thinking about the process believing?

I addressed 11 and 10 with the following revision of these sentences:

 

The latter, not the former, and so I just revised the following section to use “process of believing” because I think that works much better, and just tied it to embodied cognition. Thank you.

 

·      Nevertheless, our process of believing is rooted in embodied cognition, the inference dynamic underlying the intuition can only draw on data from the entropic condition to formulate its conception of the anentropic dimension of meaning. This is why references to the anentropic are often structured symbolically in terms of anthropomorphically conditioned imagery, because it reflects what we know best: ourselves. Belief is dynamic, everchanging, and is more than a rational-choice calculus. People aren’t religious because they believe in propositions, but because they feel and experience something.

 

 

Typos:

1.      The term “compliments” (line 78) should be: complements.

·      Edit: corrected

 

2.      The term “hyper agency detection” (line 120) should be: hyperactive agency detection.

·      Edit: corrected

 

3.      The paper is missing commas ate several places, including here: “biting too hard for example” (line 143).

·      Edit: corrected

 

4.      It was not clear whether the phrases “such agents” and “the agents” (lines 179-80) refer to the ritual participants, or to the appeasement of supernatural agents.

·      Edited: The sentence has been modified to (lines 149-52):

Rituals tend to occur spontaneously when a community is under threat, and that “once such [supernatural] agents become linked to a ritual, desires to please or appease the agents can proximally motivate the ritual performance [of participants]” (Purzycki and Sosis 2022, 151).

 

 

5.      The paper cites a paper by Cho and Squier 2022 (line 215) but there is no such paper in the Works Cited.

·      Edited: Thank you for catching this typo that should have been “22,” a page number, not a year. The citation is now: (2013, 22)

 

6.      The paper uses brackets in this sentence: “In short, [western] science emerged from religion…” (lines 367-8). Brackets are used to add terms to direct quotes. Since this is not a quote, the author can use parentheses (or omit the punctuation altogether).

·      Edited: brackets removed.

 

7.      The terms “distinction” and “act of distinction” (lines 70, 391) might be clearer as: the act of distinguishing.

·      Edited: changed

 

8.      The term “telodynamic” (lines 432, 454, 547, 603, and 648) should be: teleodynamic.

·      Edited: corrected.

 

9.      The phrase “both to preserve the system of dynastic state power, but it also afforded…” (lines 572-3) should be: both to preserve the system of dynastic state power, and to afford…

·      Edited: corrected

 

10.  I think that “ai” (line 586) should be capitalized

·      Edited: changed to “AI”

 

Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Thank you for this interesting paper. Much of the material is unfamiliar to me, though I had rough ideas of e.g. Shannon's view of information. But I came away from this paper thinking that I understood these things more. The author writes well throughout, and though there is a lot of jargon, it is put to good use on the whole. 

I think one minor addition might be to use an example of religious doctrine at e.g. p8-9. The author says that religions can be adaptive if they select elements that 'militate against uncertainty'. What kind of e.g. Christian doctrine fits here - does the early Church's adoption of Trinitarian doctrines as opposed to Arian etc. fit this pattern? What to make of the obvious uncertainty of much religious belief or religious hope (especially self-reported uncertainty on some doctrine by believers)? This is an issue that comes up again later, on p13. The author says that they prefer the language of 'anentropic', partly becuase it represents an epistemological claim - that people believe in things like God because of the yearning for something not suseptible to entropy. This is good as far as it goes, but I think the author needs to make clear a crucial distinction here. As far as I can see, the yearning for the anentropic (my phrasing, but I think it captures what the author is saying), could be part of the explanation for why a thinker is religious or perhaps sympathetic to religion or belief in God ("spiritual but not religious" perhaps). But it could not be enough by itself to explain why a thinker is Christian as opposed to Muslim, or Jain as opposed to Hindu. That is, the explanation by way of the idea of the anentropic remains at a certain level of abstractness or generality, and cannot be used to explain individual religious claims, but could be part of an explanation of religiosity. As I understand this paper, the author is on the same page as me here, though I think a reminder or pointer to the reader on the pages mentioned would help.

At line 184, Purzycki and Sosis is cited as 'P&S' and should be lengthened to conform to the rest of the paper. The sentence beginning at line 368 should be amended by replacing the first comma with a semi-colon. At line 476, "breaths" should be "breathes".

Author Response

Summary: Thank you very much for taking the time to read this manuscript and provide detailed feedback, and I appreciate you taking the time to point out the typos I missed. I particularly appreciate that you found the technical information relatively easy to understand for a non-specialist, which is always my goal in writing. I have directly addressed your comments in the manuscript (indicated below), and I did revise the structure of the argument in light of Review 1 indicating a source I needed to familiarize myself with, Coltea’s Complexifying Religion, which is a sociological analysis of the role of Shannon entropy in religious systems. It seems as Coltea and I have reached similar insights from two different starting points, sociology and philosophy, respectively. While Coltea’s analysis did not present any challenges to my core argument, I have since revised the argument so that my philosophical approach employs concepts in his contribution (e.g. Distinguishing the signal vs noise in information perceived by psychic systems, and the relationship between allopoiesis and autopoiesis). I also revised the structure of the literature review to indicate a historical progression in systems theory of religion from Luhmann, to Pace, to Purzycki and Sosis, to Coltea, with my efforts attempting a synthesis with philosophy to more completely explain the way psychic-social system communication leads to religious systems as complex and adaptive.

 

Comment1: I think one minor addition might be to use an example of religious doctrine at e.g. p8-9. The author says that religions can be adaptive if they select elements that 'militate against uncertainty'. What kind of e.g. Christian doctrine fits here - does the early Church's adoption of Trinitarian doctrines as opposed to Arian etc. fit this pattern?

 

EDIT: Absolutely! In fact, without giving away the source, the Trinitarian controversy is a case study I have used before in explaining the Shannon-entropy- reducing functioning of Christian theology. I’ve included the following addition to the final paragraph of section 3 (lines 338-387):

 

  • A paradigmatic example of a religious system selecting for an against meaning that mitigates uncertainty can be seen in the way the Nicene-Constantinopolitan creed functions to establish “orthodoxy” in theological interpretation concerning the relationship between Jesus of Nazareth and the God of Abraham in Roman Catholicism and other Christian traditions. Because Christians could openly practice their faith without fear of persecution after the Edict of Milan (313 c.e.), bishops and their presbyters began sharing theological interpretations in letters and public sermons, which injected new information into the nascent religious system. Arius’ claim that the Son, and therefore Jesus, was the “first born of creation” was a novel interpretation of the relationship considered erroneous by many bishops who thought it would nullify the possibility of salvation. Differences in theology notwithstanding, there were also practical consequences for the socio-political economy of Constantine’s newly unified empire, as the open rhetorical conflict between church leaders threatened its stability. Arius’ interpretation can be understood as a “perturbance” in Coltea’s model, defined as “informational inputs of increased magnitude, continually threatening to falsify the core propositions around which systems are organized, as well as dissolving the established relationships between the system’s elements, thus affecting its emergent aspect and output (meaning) and endangering the very existence of the system by increasing the difficulty of fulfilling its entropy reducing endeavor” (2023, 56). In the language of systems theory, Arius’ interpretation was perceived to threaten the very autopoiesis of the system of meaning that made salvation through faith in Jesus possible, because it introduced an articulation of meaning that increased rather than decreased different avenues of interpreting concerning who Jesus ultimately is. To resolve the theological conflict, Constantine called the first ecumenical council of bishops to Nicaea in 325 c.e., tasked with the goal of determining the “right faith” of the scriptural understanding Jesus’ relationship to God the Father and Holy Spirit. While controversy over theological language to describe this relationship would last for decades and require multiple councils to resolve, the Nicene-Constantinopolitan creed formulated at the Councils of Nicaea (325 c.e.) and Constantinople (381 c.e.) finds its first authoritative reference in the historical record at the council of Chalcedon (451 c.e.), albeit unintentionally (Ayres 2004, 255-6; Cf. Kelly 1983, 31). After Chalcedon, the creed served to distinguish the conceptual set upon which “orthodox” theology would proceed in the life of the “one, holy, catholic (universal), and apostolic church.” Any interpretation that lay outside the boundaries of meaning established in the creed were “anathema,” as the many schisms after Nicaea attest to, with the formation of Christian communities that rejected the interpretation of Jesus as homoousious (of the same being) with the Father, preferring instead the language of “similarity” (homoiousious).

                A philosophical approach to systems theory of religion using the centroid of entropy is not concerned with which of these interpretations is true, but rather with the evolution and adaptation of a tradition’s symbolic capital over time. What is important is that the creed is perceived by an individual to serve as an interpretive constraint on one’s experience of the Gospel message (Cf. Coltea 2023, 16, 56). This perception in turn reduces the Shannon entropy of possible interpretations in the minds of individuals concerning who Jesus is, and the continued communication of the meaningful information contained in the creed via the building blocks of liturgy and theology maintains the identity of the Church as an anti-fragile semiotic system resistant to collapse (see Coltea 2023, 58). It is in adapting to increases in information entropy (uncertainties), introduced by Arius, by leveraging Greek philosophical concepts and language found outside of scripture to maintain the religious system’s autopoiesis of meaning, that leads us to recognize the development of the Creed as an interpretative constraint, and therefore a complex adaptation of a religious system relative to informational stimuli communicated in the social environment

 

Comment 2: What to make of the obvious uncertainty of much religious belief or religious hope (especially self-reported uncertainty on some doctrine by believers)? This is an issue that comes up again later, on p13. The author says that they prefer the language of 'anentropic', partly becuase it represents an epistemological claim - that people believe in things like God because of the yearning for something not susceptible to entropy. This is good as far as it goes, but I think the author needs to make clear a crucial distinction here. As far as I can see, the yearning for the anentropic (my phrasing, but I think it captures what the author is saying), could be part of the explanation for why a thinker is religious or perhaps sympathetic to religion or belief in God ("spiritual but not religious" perhaps). But it could not be enough by itself to explain why a thinker is Christian as opposed to Muslim, orJain as opposed to Hindu. That is, the explanation by way of the idea of the anentropic remains at a certain level of abstractness or generality, and cannot be used to explain individual religious claims, but could be part of an explanation of religiosity. As I understand this paper, the author is on the same page as me here, though I think a reminder or pointer to the reader on the pages mentioned would help.

 

Edit: We are definitely on the same page here, and so I ‘ve included the following to specifically address this comment, and I’ve tried to pull back on any language that would betray an essentialism or a necessity which may risk subordinating all articulations of religion to this concept (a critique of the reviewer 1 too). I believe the following is a more nominalist aritulcation, which was my original intention with the systems theory framework. Also, I like the word “yearning,” and may employ it in a future analysis where I intend to develop the phenomenological system’s experience in the religious system.

 

  • As an epistemological claim, the intuition of the anentropic dimension of meaning helps distinguish the religious character of communication in general, but it cannot be elucidated beyond its functional articulation without the ability to recognize the symbolic representation of that intuition in communication. Religions are adaptive semiotic systems, emergent from adaptive biological systems, and so an “inside-the faith” understanding is required to recognize the articulation of the anentropic dimension of meaning in a social system’s history of symbolic communication. In addition to insights gleaned from cybernetics, sociology, and evolutionary theory, the traditional tools of religious studies and the humanities, such as linguistic, textual, and cultural analysis will remain relevant for an interdisciplinary approach to systems theory of religion.

 

Typos Changed:

 

At line 184, Purzycki and Sosis is cited as 'P&S' and should be lengthened to conform to the rest of the paper. The sentence beginning at line 368 should be amended by replacing the first comma with a semi-colon. At line 476, "breaths" should be "breathes".

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