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Advanced Data Systems for Energy Consumption Optimization and Air Quality Control in Smart Public Buildings Using a Versatile Open Source Approach

Electronics 2022, 11(23), 3904; https://doi.org/10.3390/electronics11233904
by Giuseppe Starace 1,*, Amber Tiwari 1, Gianpiero Colangelo 2 and Alessandro Massaro 1,3
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Electronics 2022, 11(23), 3904; https://doi.org/10.3390/electronics11233904
Submission received: 14 October 2022 / Revised: 10 November 2022 / Accepted: 23 November 2022 / Published: 25 November 2022

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

1. The language should be double-checked. I have seen several mistakes, and this article should proofread during the possible revision. After a double-check of the English used to try to avoid any typographical error.

2. The introduction and literature review section should be improved. Bring along as much as you can the baseline scientific proof for the knowledge you are going to explore in further sections. The literature is better to be updated based on the most recent works.

3. The results and discussion are suitable to be more described. I think Figure 3-5 requires more discussion. Also, try to remark the influential parameters as a graphical/statistical view.

 

4. I think the abstract and conclusion can be more informative 

Author Response

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Reviewer 2 Report

1.     The name of used approach should be mentioned in the paper title. Using a Low Cost Approach is not appropriate.

2.     Don’t use the abbreviations in abstract, and headings.

3.     The figures should be improved in terms of quality.

4.     The problem formulation is not clear.

5. The results should be compared with other methods.

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Reviewer 3 Report

·      Main findings need to be summarized and quantified in the Abstract

·      In Section 1 the Authors need to clearly state what knowledge gap their work will fill COMPARED TO current status on the investigated topic

·      Main findings need to be summarized and quantified in Section 5

·      In Section 5 the Authors need to summarize the limitations and the necessary future developments of their work

·      Nomenclature is missing

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Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

good

Reviewer 2 Report

No further comment.

Reviewer 3 Report

The paper can be accepted for publication 

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