A Meta-Synthesis of Technology-Supported Peer Feedback in ESL/EFL Writing Classes Research: A Replication of Chen’s Study
Abstract
:1. Introduction
- (1)
- What are the characteristics of technology-supported peer-feedback activities found in the primary studies from 2011 to 2022?
- (2)
- What are the technologies used in computer-mediated peer interactions, and what are their advantages and disadvantages? In what ways do these activities affect students’ perceptions and attitudes?
- (3)
- What are the main themes emerging from the GT analysis, and what is the metatheory for the synthesis?
2. Literature Review
3. Methodology
3.1. The Data Collection Stage
3.2. Literature Searching Steps
- (1)
- Peer feedback/peer response/peer review/peer editing/peer interaction;
- (2)
- Peer feedback (and the interchangeable items in item (1) + ESL/EFL writing);
- (3)
- Peer cooperation + ESL/EFL writing;
- (4)
- Peer feedback (and the interchangeable terms in item (1) + training in ESL/EFL writing);
- (5)
- Online (computer-mediated, technology-enhanced, synchronous, and asynchronous) + peer feedback (the interchangeable terms in item (1) + ESL/EFL writing).
- (1)
- Educational Resource Information Center (ERIC);
- (2)
- Social Science Citation Index (SSCI);
- (3)
- Arts & Humanities Citation Index (AHCI);
- (4)
- Academic Search Premier (EBSCO HOST);
- (5)
- Cambridge Core;
- (6)
- Project Muse;
- (7)
- JSTOR;
- (8)
- Directory of Open Access Journals.
3.3. The Data Evaluation Stage
- (1)
- The studies had to be published or completed between 2011 and 2022 and had to take place in ESL/EFL writing classrooms.
- (2)
- The instructors of the studies had to employ at least one type of technology (computer-mediated) mode of peer-feedback activities in the writing class.
- (3)
- The studies had to use a qualitative or a mixed research design including qualitative analysis.
- (4)
- Similar to Chen’s study, the qualitative data found in each article had to meet five criteria, adopted from the Qualitative Research Guidelines of Journals of Language Learning and Technology and TESOL Quarterly:
- (a)
- The articles contained thorough descriptions of the research contexts and participants.
- (b)
- The procedures of data collection and data analysis had to be fully described.
- (c)
- The articles’ findings, limitations, and implications were described.
- (d)
- A description of a clear and salient organization of patterns should be included in the data analysis.
- (e)
- The findings had to be interpreted holistically, and the writers had to trace the meaning of patterns throughout all of the contexts in which they were entrenched.
3.4. Coding the Literature
4. Coding Results
5. Discussion of Research Questions
- The way students’ learning, perceptions, and attitudes are affected by technology-supported feedback activities should be considered.
- The benefits and drawbacks of using computer-mediated feedback (compared to face-to-face feedback) should be considered when applying them in the classes.
- The instructors should provide proper training for the students (both in terms of giving helpful feedback and utilizing the online platforms).
- Considering contextual factors in peer feedback activities plays an important role in successfully integrating technology in giving feedback.
Understanding the students’ preferences, capabilities, and attitudes regarding using technology features in learning, as well as considering the contextual factors, the advantages and disadvantages of each online platform, and the instructors’ ability in providing training on giving proper feedback and using technology determine the extent to which implementing technology-supported peer feedback activities would be successful.
6. Implications
7. Conclusions
Author Contributions
Funding
Institutional Review Board Statement
Informed Consent Statement
Data Availability Statement
Conflicts of Interest
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Type of Research Design | Studies |
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Qualitative research design | |
Mixed-method research design |
Study No. | Author (Year) | Name of Platforms | Function of the Platforms |
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1 | (Yang and Wu 2011) | Diff Engine | Diff Engine highlights newly added words and crosses out newly deleted words in the system to show revisions. |
2 | Colpitts and Past (2019) | Google Docs | Google Docs allows easy access to writing critiques, editing, and sharing peer feedback. |
3 | Xu and Yu (2018) | Qzone | A popular blog platform in China used to post student blogs. |
4 | Lin et al. (2013) | BALL | Used for blog-assisted language learning. |
5 | Chen (2012) | Blogging platform | A blog-based platform for peer-reviewing (no specific names). |
6 | Pham (2020) | Google Docs | Google Docs allows easy access to writing critiques, editing, and sharing peer feedback. |
7 | Kayacan and Razı (2017) | Edmodo | Edmodo is an educational technology platform for K-12 schools and teachers. Edmodo enables teachers to share content and distribute quizzes and assignments |
8 | Ciftci and Kocoglu (2012) | Blogger (http://www.blogger.com accessed on 28 December 2022) | Blogger is an American online content management system founded in 1999 that enables multi-user blogs with time-stamped entries. |
9 | Saeed et al. (2018) | Facebook Groups | A social networking website that can be used to exchange feedback for text revisions and written reflections. |
10 | Lin (2015) | Lang8 | A free language blogging website, Lang8 allows users to create their own blogs. |
11 | Li and Li (2017) | Turnitin | Turnitin offers features such as PeerMark that give students the ability to browse, analyze, score, and assess the papers that their classmates have turned in. |
12 | Kitchakarn (2013) | Blogger.com (website) | Blogger, an online website, serves as a platform for peer feedback exercises. Blogger is an American online content management system founded in 1999 that enables multi-user blogs with time-stamped entries. |
13 | Woo et al. (2013) | Wiki tool (PBworks) | A wiki application called PBworks enables students to engage together in writing courses, co-create their writing on PBworks pages made specifically for each group, and exchange helpful criticism and comments on the platform. |
14 | Nguyen (2012) | Blog (www.opera.com accessed on 28 December 2022) | Users of a class blog (www.opera.com accessed on 28 December 2022) have access to a free blog service site where they can submit details on grammatical constructions, writing conventions, and reading texts. |
15 | Saglamel and Çetinkaya (2022) | Google Docs | Peer reviews can be written, edited, and shared using Google Docs. |
16 | Abdullah et al. (2018) | CMC (online Blog forum) | An online platform (CMC blog) that allows peer feedback exercises. |
17 | Hussin et al. (2015) | Blog and Facebook | CMC applications (blog and Facebook) improve writing ability through peer involvement and interaction. |
18 | Ho (2015) | Online Meeting | The CMPR involves OnlineMeeting, an interface simulating a split-screen protocol specifically designed for synchronous online peer review. |
19 | Ho (2012) | Online Meeting and Word | Word allows students to directly type comments on the computer, track changes, and highlight important features. The OnlineMeeting system automatically generates web links allowing users access to online chat rooms. |
20 | Belén Díez-Bedmar and Pérez-Paredes (2012) | Moodle | Moodle is a Course Management System (CMS) or learning platform designed to provide educators, administrators, and learners with a single robust, secure, and integrated system to create personalized learning environments. |
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Cuocci, S.; Fattahi Marnani, P.; Khan, I.; Roberts, S. A Meta-Synthesis of Technology-Supported Peer Feedback in ESL/EFL Writing Classes Research: A Replication of Chen’s Study. Languages 2023, 8, 114. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages8020114
Cuocci S, Fattahi Marnani P, Khan I, Roberts S. A Meta-Synthesis of Technology-Supported Peer Feedback in ESL/EFL Writing Classes Research: A Replication of Chen’s Study. Languages. 2023; 8(2):114. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages8020114
Chicago/Turabian StyleCuocci, Sophie, Padideh Fattahi Marnani, Iram Khan, and Shayla Roberts. 2023. "A Meta-Synthesis of Technology-Supported Peer Feedback in ESL/EFL Writing Classes Research: A Replication of Chen’s Study" Languages 8, no. 2: 114. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages8020114
APA StyleCuocci, S., Fattahi Marnani, P., Khan, I., & Roberts, S. (2023). A Meta-Synthesis of Technology-Supported Peer Feedback in ESL/EFL Writing Classes Research: A Replication of Chen’s Study. Languages, 8(2), 114. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages8020114