Review Reports
by
- Emilio M. Ungerfeld
Reviewer 1: Cesar Pinares-Patiño Reviewer 2: Anusorn Seubsai Reviewer 3: Alejandro Lara
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
General comments
I committed to review this manuscript based on the statements in the abstract. I thought it would be a very important contribution to the knowledge addressing the emissions of enteric methane from livestock. However, in the process of reading I found that the simulation is highly theoretical with not much of substance to inform research in the short- or longer-term. The practical application of outcomes of the work is far away from realisation. This relates to the fact that only around 2% of the global enteric CH4 emission are associated with intensive production systems, yet the modelling exercise addresses the mitigation impact on production volume basis rather than animal populations and locations. This fact is clearly stated in the Section 8. The likelihood of adoption of the feed additives in the systems where most of the animals are found would be minimal, especially when there will be no co-benefits, especially net profit. If these facts were stated earlier in the manuscript, I would have rejected the MS earlier in the review. The manuscript fails in discussing the effect of other pathways of mitigating emissions; whether additive effects would be possible. Overall, the manuscript is well written.
Specific comments/suggestions
Lines 2-4. … Title do not reflect objectives. Does not mention the factor related to emission intensity (is this synonymous of sustainable intensification)?. Insert …emissions from livestock
Line 39. How relevant is crop yield to this manuscript? perhaps forage primary production?
Lines 40-41. Is this independent from reduction in other GHG?
Lines 41-43. Not clear
Lines 56-67. Intensification is heavily constrained by environmental (abiotic) conditions in most livestock systems/typologies.
Line 78. Increase in animal numbers and animal body size?
Lines 84-85. Repeating 24 and 47%
Line 102. Animal production vs animal population
Lines 103-107. Intensification will not be cost-effective, neither sustainable in systems under high environmental constraints. On the contrary it can have undesired consequences.
Line 102. Most of livestock most likely are already being fed at full rumen capacity (with bulky and low digestible feeds). So, 58% increase is unrealistic.
Line 128. What about safety for the animals and the consumers?
Line 130-135. Is this realistic? Some academic seems are unaware of global livestock systems.
Line 159. Production of what?
Lines 173-178. What is the driver for such an adoption?
Line 184..production. For meat
Line 193. Given that Chang
Lines 269-271. So what is the purpose of this manuscript? What other means are there to drive adoption?
Line 271. Four two
Table 2. DMI, ADG and G:F, all are worrying. There are negative effects or NS; then no driver for adoption
Lines 295 and 296. Liveweight gain not body mass gain
Line 363 ‘decrease’ use another word, avoid confusion
Line 365. Is this in vitro stuff relevant?
Line 368. Affecting… affect
Lines 370-378. Drivers for adoption, affordability, cost-effectiveness, delivery pathways, perishability ?
Lines 391-393. How long were these studies. In the longer term it may
Line 420. Uncertain or very small?
Lines 440-441. Not absolutely true. On forage diets of poor quality it is necessary for the process to occur. How important is the lost of energy?. 6-8% of GEI, how important is compared to loss in indigestibility for example?
Line 457. In practice, these extremes are not present.
Line 464. Saving of metabolizable energy? MEI=GEI-FE-UE-GE
Line 484. H2 is also called ‘intermediate GHG’ it enhances the lifetime of CH4 because consumes OH
Lines 649-670. It would be desirable to discuss ‘delivery’ in a separated sub-section
Line 671. This is the most important section to me, but sadly touched only towards the end
Line 673, ruminants in free ranging system on rangelands and grasslands
Line 674. Production systems/typologies
Line 675 extensive systems based only on the utilisation of natural grasslands/rangelands, crop-livestock mixed systems. I am sorry, you must describe better this whole paragraph. Do not confound. Pastures mean cultivated forages (annual or perennial, used mostly by grazing). TMR is for intensive systems (feedlots). Mixed systems may use concentrates to supplements forages or crop residues.
Lines 683-685. Most of animal research are done with few animals under highly constrained/controlled environment and for a short period: days or few weeks. Obviously are not representative of production systems.
Line 686. Precisely, all this knowledge are being extrapolated to extensive free-ranging situations. Most of researchers in LMIC copy that knowledge.
Line 712. I have seen hundreds of reviews and outputs of modelling that unfortunately miss the context of global livestock production, trying to sell the high-hanging fruits before the low hanging fruits are not being exploited. Here, for example, I do not see a discussion of the best animal husbandry practices impact on reduction of Ei as well as absolute emissions (culling unproductive animals, reducing herd maintenance feed intake, etc). Neither there is discussion of other pathways of emissions reduction.
Lied 726-728. Synergies with other desirable outcomes? Animal welfare, other environmental impacts?
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Reviewer 2 Report
1. Figures 1-4 should be re-designed into one figure.
2. Why do the lines in between figure 1 (a) and (b) have no difference?
3. Again, figures 5-8 should be re-designed into one figure.
4. Please discuss more on the difference between plots (a) and (b) in each figure (figures 1-8).
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Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for Authors
The manuscript entitled “Opportunities and hurdles to the adoption and enhanced efficacy 2 of feed additives towards pronounced mitigation of enteric 3 methane emissions” has been carefully evaluated. The study attempts to determine the mitigation of enteric methane (CH4) emissions from ruminants with the use of feed additives inhibiting rumen methanogenesis to limit the global temperature increase to 1.5 °C.
Please note my specific comments and suggestions below:
Abstract
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Comment: It is convenient to include a chapter of “General introduction” that establishes the importance and justification of the subject to be analyzed in this document and establishes the main objective.
1. Enteric methane emissions and climate change
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2. Intensification, productivity, and enteric methane emissions
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3. Mitigation of enteric methane emissions
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4. Projection of global enteric methane emission under different scenarios of intensification and adoption of inhibitors of methanogenesis
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5. Pronounced inhibition of rumen methanogenesis with feed additives
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6. Opportunities and hurdles to increase the adoption and efficacy of methanogenesis inhibitors
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7. Cost-effectiveness of pronounced mitigation of enteric methane emissions
7.1. Economic incentives
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7.2. Methanogenesis inhibition increasing feed efficiency
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7.3. Adjusting basal diet composition to the inhibition of methanogenesis
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7.4. Improving the effectiveness of inhibitors of methanogenesis
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8. Adoption of inhibitors of methanogenesis in extensive systems
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9. Final remarks
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Comments. It is advisable that the document contains a chapter on Conclusions. Generally, conclusions contain the most relevant findings of the research, are written in long lines, do not contain citations or references, and do not repeat results verbatim.
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