Research on the Ecological Deconstruction of E-Cigarette Industrial Clusters in Shenzhen, China, and a Niche Analysis of Related Enterprises
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
- Please use the right font size in the abstract
- The entire paper is full of ";" instead of "." - line 29
- Please explain all abbreviations before use - e.g. line 85: CSR
- Line 122: please never use the term "some"
- Line 293: R&D
- Line 372: please indicate a reference, not a link
- Line393: Fig. 5
- Please add a Discussion
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Reviewer 2 Report
The manuscript has a good innovation capability in terms of innovation and the subject under analysis. But two important points can help improve the quality of the manuscript:
1- The main issue and problem that this research has been done to answer, has not been expressed well and with the necessary clarity. It is necessary to introduce this in the last paragraph of the section.
2. Usually in descriptive-analytical research, the bridge between the introduction section and the data analysis section is an important part of the methodology. And with items such as type of research method, the reason for choosing this type of research method, data collection method, community and sampling method, and the reason for choosing the data analysis method should be stated accurately.
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Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
All melioration advices have been well implemented.
