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Analysis of Dental Implant Rehabilitation in the Reconstructed Jaw by Deep Circumflex Iliac Artery Flap, a Retrospective Study

Appl. Sci. 2022, 12(14), 7050; https://doi.org/10.3390/app12147050
by Jun-Seok Choi 1, Ye-Joon Jo 1, Jin-Ah Bang 1, Jin Kim 2, Ji-Su Oh 2 and Seong-Yong Moon 2,*
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3:
Reviewer 4: Anonymous
Appl. Sci. 2022, 12(14), 7050; https://doi.org/10.3390/app12147050
Submission received: 23 May 2022 / Revised: 4 July 2022 / Accepted: 6 July 2022 / Published: 13 July 2022
(This article belongs to the Section Applied Dentistry and Oral Sciences)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

I consider that this is a good job, well written, clear and concise.

I only recommend that the authors add one more reference, since oral rehabilitation with implants can not only be done after a tumor or osteonecrosis process, it can have a traumatic origin.

Fernández-Ferro M, Fernández-Sanromán J, Costas-López A, López-Betancourt A, Casañas-Villalba N, López-Fernández P. Complex Dentoalveolar Fractures: Main Clinical Variables Description and Analysis. J Craniofac Surg. 2020 Nov/Dec;31(8):e761-e765. doi: 10.1097/SCS.0000000000006711. PMID: 33136904.

thanks. 

Author Response

I only recommend that the authors add one more reference, since oral rehabilitation with implants can not only be done after a tumor or osteonecrosis process, it can have a traumatic origin.

Fernández-Ferro M, Fernández-Sanromán J, Costas-López A, López-Betancourt A, Casañas-Villalba N, López-Fernández P. Complex Dentoalveolar Fractures: Main Clinical Variables Description and Analysis. J Craniofac Surg. 2020 Nov/Dec;31(8):e761-e765. doi: 10.1097/SCS.0000000000006711. PMID: 33136904.

Response:

The manuscript was revised by adding a reference according to the reviewer's recommendation.

Reviewer 2 Report

Manuscript ID: applsci-1761112

Title: A retrospective analysis of dental implant rehabilitation in the reconstructed jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery flap

1.What is the main question addressed by the research?

To evaluate the clinical efficacy of the reconstruction of the 13 jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery (DCIA) flap

2.Is it relevant and interesting?

The article is relevant and interesting.

3.How original is the topic?

The topic is current.

4.What does it add to the subject area compared with other published material?

The authors have collected and analyzed a great deal of recent data in retrospective form.

5.Is the paper well written?

Yes, the manuscript is well written.

6.Is the text clear and easy to read?

Yes, but minor English editing is required.

7.Are the conclusions consistent with the evidence and arguments presented?

Yes, the conclusions consistent with the evidence and arguments presented but further studies are necessary to confirm authors’ hypothesis.

8.Do they address the main question posed?

Yes, the Authors addressed the main question posed.

Other comments:

  • English language: Minor English editing is required.
  • Title: I suggest deleting the "a"; New title “retrospective analysis of dental implant rehabilitation in the reconstructed jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery flap”
  • Abstract: To attract the reader's attention, please clarify the target of the article, and structure the abstract.
  • Introduction: This section needs some improvements.

·       I suggest to add references after this sentence “Large bone defects after a resection, caused by tumor, or osteonecrosis can occur anywhere on the oral and maxillofacial area” [PMID: 26758757 - PMID: 32615096]

·       I suggest to add a brief part about the parameters that can influence implant rehabilitation success [PMID: 34352129 - PMID: 32098046].

·       Methods: On fig.1 the references on pictures d. e. f. are missing.

  • Given the images included in the manuscript, were all the implants inserted in guided mode?
  • In your opinion, could this have an influence on the success of the implant rehabilitation?
  • How marginal bone loss was recorded? have intraoral x-ray evaluations been carried out?
  • Results: This section was properly prepared.
  • Discussion: What is the main theme that emerges from the authors' analysis? Is the study design a limitation? Please improve.
  • Conclusion: This section was properly prepared but further studies are necessary to confirm authors’ hypothesis.

After making the indicated changes, the article may be suitable for publication.

Thanks for the opportunity to review this manuscript.

Author Response

* English language: Minor English editing is required.

Response: Editing was done.

* Title: I suggest deleting the "a"; New title “retrospective analysis of dental implant rehabilitation in the reconstructed jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery flap”

Response : The manuscript was revised by changing the title according to the reviewer’s recommendation.

* Abstract: To attract the reader's attention, please clarify the target of the article, and structure the abstract.

Response : To clarify the target of the article, revised the abstract.

* Introduction: This section needs some improvements.

  • I suggest to add references after this sentence “Large bone defects after a resection, caused by tumor, or osteonecrosis can occur anywhere on the oral and maxillofacial area” [PMID: 26758757 - PMID: 32615096]

Response : The manuscript was revised by adding reference according to the reviewer’s recommendation.

  • I suggest to add a brief part about the parameters that can influence implant rehabilitation success [PMID: 34352129 - PMID: 32098046].

Response : The manuscript was revised by adding a brief part of parameters for implant rehabilitation success according to the reviewer’s recommendation

  • Methods: On fig.1 the references on pictures d. e. f. are missing.

Response: references are added

* Given the images included in the manuscript, were all the implants inserted in guided mode? Resoponse : In all patients, the guide mode was used for dental implant placement.

* In your opinion, could this have an influence on the success of the implant rehabilitation? Response :  The DCIA flap provides sufficient graft bone volume. It is advantageous for mantanence after implant placement and rehabilitation. In addition, the DCIA flap is a vascularized bone graft with a lower bone resorption compared to a non-vascularized bone graft.

* How marginal bone loss was recorded? have intraoral x-ray evaluations been carried out?

Response : We compared panoramic radiographs immediately after implant placement, at the time of impression taking for a prosthesis, and 6-12 months after the prosthesis

* Results: This section was properly prepared.

* Discussion: What is the main theme that emerges from the authors' analysis? Is the study design a limitation? Please improve.

Response : In discuss section we have mentioned about the benefits of this study. Main results are that DICA flap has advantages for implantation, in terms of crown root ratio and optimal bone quantity and quality due to the reproducing the original contour of the jaw bone.

* Conclusion: This section was properly prepared but further studies are necessary to confirm authors’ hypothesis.

Reviewer 3 Report

Authors performed a study to evaluate the clinical efficiency of the reconstruction of jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery (DCIA) flap. The results demonstrate that DCIA flap is a reliable way for reproducing the original contour of the jaw bone and provide clinical benefits for implant placement. 

Minor

Table 5 is not properly displayed.

 

Author Response

Table 5 is not properly displayed.

Response : The manuscript was revised by rearranging table 5 according to the reviewers recommendation.

Reviewer 4 Report

I found this study interesting although the sample size is less, still, I believe this study can be improved and processed as a baseline for future researchers to work on. please incorporate the changes recommended.

Title: revise it, the study design should come at the end of the statement.

"Analysis of dental implant rehabilitation in the two reconstructed jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery flap, A retrospective study"

Abstract: 

check for grammatical errors, write the sentences in the past tense, three in words place of number i.e "3"

Use MeSH keywords, it is recommended not to use terms reflected in the study's title.

Introduction:

Expand the text to a maximum of 7 paragraphs, and try to focus on the literature review, the loopholes in published data, why you are doing this study, what are you doing, and how this study will benefit the readers or clinicians in practice.

Heading no 2: Patients and methods revise to "materials and methods"

Discussion: 

mention limitations and strengths of the in 2nd last paragraph

Include future directions for further research in this aspect to investigators.

Author Response

Title: revise it, the study design should come at the end of the statement.

"Analysis of dental implant rehabilitation in the two reconstructed jawbone by deep circumflex iliac artery flap, A retrospective study"

Response : The manuscript was revised by changing the title according to the reviewer’s recommendation.

Abstract: 

check for grammatical errors, write the sentences in the past tense, three in words place of number i.e "3"

Response : The manuscript was revised by changing the three in words to number according to the reviewer’s recommendation.

Use MeSH keywords, it is recommended not to use terms reflected in the study's title.

Response : We have revised the keywords by using Mesh Keywaords as followings

Maxillo-mandibular reconstruction; Dental Implant; Deep Circumflex Iliac Artery flap; Microsurgical free flaps; Bone Resorption.

 

Introduction:

Expand the text to a maximum of 7 paragraphs, and try to focus on the literature review, the loopholes in published data, why you are doing this study, what are you doing, and how this study will benefit the readers or clinicians in practice.

Response : As suggested by the reviewer, we added the published data and sentences for this study.

 

 

Heading no 2: Patients and methods revise to "materials and methods"

Response : The manuscript was revised by changing the heading no 2 according to the reviewer’s recommendation.

Discussion: 

mention limitations and strengths of the in 2nd last paragraph

Include future directions for further research in this aspect to investigators.

Response : We have added the sentences for limitation and future directions for further research as recommended

 

Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Authors improved the manuscript in many parts.
This study could be evaluable for publication.

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